Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and word order, keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), and add a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more detail. For example, say “Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes” and explain why with a reason and a brief example.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes because I love capturing natural beauty. For example, when I travel I always take photos to remember the places I visited and to share them with my family.

Suggestion: Work on accuracy, coherence and completeness: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement), and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, however) and provide one or two specific supporting details about why you prefer rural views.

Example: I prefer rural views because they have open landscapes, fresh air and lots of greenery, which helps me relax. For instance, during holidays I often visit the countryside to walk in nature and clear my mind; however, I sometimes enjoy urban views for their architecture and lively atmosphere.

Suggestion: Improve word choice, grammar and clarity: use correct phrases (e.g., “in my own country” or “views from my country”), avoid awkward words like “Sincerely abroad” and check collocations (e.g., “experience different cultures”). Begin with a clear preference sentence, then add a contrast with linking word 'however' and one specific example.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and remind me of family trips and local festivals. However, I also enjoy views abroad because they offer new experiences, such as unique architecture and landscapes I can't find at home.

× Yes, I enjoy photography different landscape.

✓ Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund, so 'photography' (a noun) is incorrect here. Also 'landscape' should be plural to match the general idea of many views. Use 'photographing' (gerund) and 'landscapes' for grammatical accuracy and natural expression.

× When I travel I always take photos so I can take back on the memories later.

✓ When I travel, I always take photos so I can look back on the memories later.

The phrase 'take back on the memories' is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'look back on' meaning to remember. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I prefer views in rural area because it's open landscape, the environment has fresh air because there has more greenery and relaxing atmosphere.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the landscape is open, the environment has fresh air, more greenery, and a relaxing atmosphere.

Use the plural 'rural areas' to refer generally to countryside. 'In rural area' lacks an article and number. 'It's open landscape' should be 'the landscape is open' for clarity. 'There has more greenery' is ungrammatical; use 'has more greenery' with 'the environment' or 'there is more greenery'. Also include commas to separate items in a list.

× It's failed me to connect it with nature.

✓ I feel that it helps me connect with nature.

'It's failed me to connect it with nature' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'I feel that' or 'It helps me' to express the intended meaning. Use 'connect with nature' (no extra pronoun 'it'). 'Failed me' is incorrect in this context.

× Whenever I has holidays I often to go for rulers area for refreshing my mind.

✓ Whenever I have holidays, I often go to rural areas to refresh my mind.

Subject-verb agreement: 'I has' is incorrect; use 'I have'. Remove the unnecessary 'to' after 'often'. 'Rulers area' is a misspelling/incorrect word; use 'rural areas'. Add commas for clarity and use the infinitive 'to refresh' correctly.

× However I also.

✓ However, I also enjoy photographing urban scenes sometimes.

The original fragment 'However I also.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Provide a complete clause that contrasts the previous sentence, e.g. 'I also enjoy photographing urban scenes sometimes.' Include a comma after 'However'.

× I prefer in my own country because they are familiar and evoke personal memories such as family trips or local festivals which make them more meaningful.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and evoke personal memories such as family trips or local festivals, which make them more meaningful.

Add 'views' after 'prefer' or use 'prefer in' to 'prefer views in' for clarity. The original 'I prefer in my own country' omits the object. Also add a comma before the relative clause 'which make them more meaningful'. Pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'views' but ensure 'views' is explicit.

× However, I also enjoy Sincerely abroad for this novelty and different culture press practice like unique architecture or landscape that I can't find at home.

✓ However, I also enjoy traveling abroad for the novelty and different cultures, such as unique architecture or landscapes that I can't find at home.

The original sentence has many problems: 'Sincerely' is incorrect and likely a mistranslation; use 'traveling'. 'Different culture press practice' is unclear; use 'different cultures'. 'Like' should be 'such as' to introduce examples. Use plural 'landscapes' to match 'architecture' and add commas for clarity.