Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần rút gọn, sửa ngữ pháp và làm cụ thể hơn. Hãy dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ dùng từ vựng chính xác và liên kết mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'go to a coffee shop', 'I wait for my friends', 'have a memory' nên là 'make memories'.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go to a coffee shop I often wait for my friends and take photos to capture small moments; these photos help me remember our conversations and the cosy atmosphere.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời mơ hồ, có lỗi ngữ pháp và mâu thuẫn (nói thích khu vực đô thị nhưng gọi là 'quiet' và 'loved to be alone'). Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'From my point of view' đứng đầu), và giải thích cụ thể lý do chọn đô thị hoặc nông thôn với ví dụ. Hạn chế tiếng lấp và nói rời rạc.

Example: From my point of view, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and help me concentrate on my studies. For instance, in the countryside I can study without traffic noise or crowded cafés, which makes it easier to focus.

Suggestion: Ý tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chưa chính xác ('choose other country', 'I'd like to traveling', 'I'm a social people'). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu rõ ràng, giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Thay 'social people' bằng 'a sociable person'.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy traveling and experiencing different cultures. As a sociable person, I like meeting locals and trying new foods, which gives me a deeper understanding of each place.

× When I go to coffee shop I always wait for my friend and then take a picture to have a memory with them.

✓ When I go to a coffee shop I always wait for my friend and then take a picture to have a memory of them.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular, countable noun: 'a coffee shop'. Use the preposition 'of' rather than 'with' when expressing 'a memory of someone'. Also consider number agreement: 'my friend' is singular, so 'them' is awkward; use 'them' only for singular they or change to 'him/her' for clarity. Suggestion: '...take a picture to have a memory of my friend.'

× I from my point of view, I prefer to live in urban areas because I like the quiet place to focus 100% in on doing homework.

✓ From my point of view, I prefer to live in urban areas because I like a quiet place to focus completely on doing my homework.

Remove the redundant subject 'I' after the introductory phrase 'From my point of view'. Use the article 'a' with 'quiet place' and use 'completely' instead of '100%' for natural phrasing. The correct preposition is 'on' after 'focus' and include the possessive 'my' for 'homework'. Also avoid the awkward phrase 'in on'.

× Uh, I loved to be alone.

✓ Uh, I like to be alone.

The context is present preference, so use present simple 'like' not past 'loved'. Alternatively, 'I love being alone' uses the gerund 'being' which is more natural after verbs expressing preference. Use present tense to match the rest of the response.

× I prefer to choose other country because I'd like to traveling all around the world.

✓ I prefer to choose another country because I'd like to travel all around the world.

Use 'another' before a singular countable noun 'country'. After 'would like' use the base verb 'travel' (not the -ing form). 'Prefer to choose' is redundant; you can say 'I prefer other countries' or 'I prefer to choose another country'.

× I'm a social people, so I love to learn a new thing or see a new place, visit a new place.

✓ I'm a sociable person, so I love learning new things and visiting new places.

'People' is plural; for one person use 'person'. 'Social' describes behavior but 'sociable' or 'social person' is better. Use gerunds 'learning' and 'visiting' for activities and plural 'new things/places' to sound natural.