Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, correct grammar (use present simple/perfect), and give one or two specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas briefly.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture interesting landscapes and everyday scenes. For example, I often take photos during my weekend walks in the park, when the light and shadows create nice patterns.

Suggestion: Answer directly with one clear preference, reduce pauses and filler words, avoid repeating words, and add a concrete supporting detail or brief comparison with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example").

Example: I prefer rural areas because they offer scenic landscapes and a peaceful atmosphere for photography. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields and traditional villages, where I can capture daily life and local customs.

Suggestion: Remove irrelevant or confusing statements ("because I am female" is inappropriate here). Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons and a short example with correct grammar. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and appreciate their variety, from beaches to hills. For example, last summer I visited a rural village where I photographed coastal cliffs and farmland, which showed a striking contrast in scenery.

× I love photography and enjoy photography because it gives me captured interesting interesting landscapes and every everyday scenarios.

✓ I love photography because it allows me to capture interesting landscapes and everyday scenes.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect forms: 'gives me captured' is wrong because 'capture' requires an active verb form. 'Captured' is a past participle and does not fit after 'gives me'. Also there is repetition ('interesting' twice, 'every everyday') and 'scenarios' is better as 'scenes' in this context. Use 'allows me to capture' (verb + to-infinitive) to express capability and correct the present participle misuse.

× And I often take photos when I when I I getting free.

✓ And I often take photos when I am free.

The phrase 'I getting free' incorrectly uses the present participle 'getting' instead of the correct present simple or present continuous structure. The intended meaning is a state ('when I am free'), so use the verb 'to be' in present simple 'am'. Remove repeated words 'when I when I I'.

× I prefer rural areas because they have more, uh, more scenic landscapes and peace and the peaceful environment, which is ideal for taking any photos.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they have more scenic landscapes and a peaceful environment, which is ideal for taking photos.

'More' was repeated and 'peace and the peaceful environment' is redundant. Use 'a peaceful environment' with the indefinite article to describe a general environment. 'Any photos' is unnatural; simply 'photos' is appropriate. This fixes article misuse and redundancy.

× I also enjoy the traditional uh, villages and the green fields and also, uh, their interesting culture and.

✓ I also enjoy traditional villages, green fields, and their interesting cultures.

The original ends abruptly with 'and.' It repeats 'also' and filler 'uh.' Improve sentence structure by listing items with commas and a final 'and' before the last item. Use plural 'cultures' if referring to multiple villages' cultures, and remove trailing conjunction.

× I prefer the views in my own country because I am female.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I am familiar with them.

'I am female' is irrelevant to preferring views and seems to be a misuse of pronoun/word choice. The student likely meant 'familiar with' (sounds similar). Replace with 'familiar with them' to explain preference. This corrects the incorrect use of a pronoun/word that changes meaning.

× I am similar with the landscapes and I appreciate the variety of my own country, from coastal beaches to hills from for.

✓ I am familiar with the landscapes, and I appreciate the variety of my country, from coastal beaches to hills.

'Similar with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'familiar with.' The clause 'from coastal beaches to hills from for' contains extraneous words 'from for.' Remove duplicates and unnecessary prepositions to make a clear range expression.

× For example, last summer I visited a rural village a rural village where the panel.

✓ For example, last summer I visited a rural village where the people were very welcoming.

The original repeats 'a rural village' and ends with an incomplete clause 'where the panel.' This is a sentence structure error and likely a mispronunciation or wrong word. Replace with a complete clause that fits the context (e.g., 'people were very welcoming'). Ensure the sentence is complete and coherent.