Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., "umm"), and include one specific detail or reason using a linking word. Keep to under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, when I go out with friends I often photograph sunsets and city streets to remember the day.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and add a clear reason with a linking word. Use more natural phrasing (e.g., "more appealing" not "absorbing") and provide one brief supporting detail.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For instance, I like photographing fields and mountains since they offer calm landscapes and interesting textures.

Suggestion: Remove hesitation and simplify the structure: give a clear topic sentence, explain why using a linking word, and include a specific example. Correct country names and avoid vague phrases like "and so on."

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer more variety and new cultural scenery. For example, I would love to photograph the historic streets of England and the dramatic landscapes in the United States to see different architecture and nature.

× Umm, every time I go outside to play with my friends, I like to use my phone to record the beautiful sceneries.

✓ Umm, every time I go outside to play with my friends, I like to use my phone to record the beautiful scenery.

The noun 'scenery' is an uncountable noun in English and does not take a plural form 'sceneries'. Use 'scenery' to refer to views or landscapes in general. Suggestion: replace plural forms of uncountable nouns with the singular form and rephrase if you need to emphasize variety (e.g., 'different kinds of scenery'). ','grammar_problem_type_id':6},{