Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct vocabulary (e.g. “take pictures,” “city skyline,” “sunsets”) and avoid fragments. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I travel I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to capture the atmosphere. I also like to experiment with different angles to make the photos more interesting.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two coherent supporting details with correct vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct collocations (e.g. “peaceful atmosphere,” “open scenery,” “countryside”). Avoid unclear words like “futures” and “distills.”

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because I find the open scenery and peaceful atmosphere more relaxing. For example, walking through the countryside lets me enjoy fields and distant hills, which feels very calm compared with busy cities.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and explain why using specific, correct language. Remove filler words (umm, uh), correct grammar (e.g. “because I feel familiar with them” or “they hold special memories for me”), and give a concrete example of a place or scene.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and hold special memories for me. For example, I love the cotton fields near my hometown, where watching the sunset always reminds me of childhood evenings.

× Yes, I enjoy taking picture of different views because it helps me capture unique moments and remember place visits.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture unique moments and remember places I have visited.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (plural). 'It helps' incorrectly uses singular pronoun for 'pictures'; use 'they help'. 'place visits' is unnatural; use 'places I have visited' for clarity and correct plurality. Suggestion: Ensure nouns match number and pronouns agree with antecedents (pictures -> they). Use natural phrasing for visits.

× For example, I often photograph sunset and city skyline skylights when I travel.

✓ For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel.

Countable nouns 'sunset' and 'city skyline' should be plural here because 'often' and 'I often photograph' imply multiple instances; also 'skylights' is incorrect word choice (skylight is an architectural feature). Use 'sunsets' and 'city skylines'. Suggestion: Make countable nouns plural when referring to repeated occurrences.

× Also photography.

✓ I also enjoy photography.

'Also photography' is a fragment lacking a verb and subject. Recast as a full sentence: 'I also enjoy photography.' Suggestion: Ensure each sentence contains a subject and a verb.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy wild, often scenery and peaceful atmosphere.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy wild, open scenery and a peaceful atmosphere.

The original misorders adjectives and uses 'often' incorrectly. 'Wild, open scenery' is a natural adjective sequence; 'a peaceful atmosphere' requires the article 'a'. Suggestion: Order adjectives logically and include articles for singular nouns ('a peaceful atmosphere').

× For example, walking through the countryside and seeing futures and distills.

✓ For example, I enjoy walking through the countryside and seeing features and details.

'Futures and distills' are incorrect words; likely meant 'features and details'. The original lacks subject in the clause; add 'I enjoy' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and complete sentence structure (subject + verb).

× Umm, I prefer views in my own country because I feel familiar how special memory for me.

✓ Umm, I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and hold special memories for me.

'I feel familiar how special memory for me' is ungrammatical. Use pronoun 'they' to refer to 'views', 'feel familiar' expresses familiarity, and 'hold special memories for me' is a natural collocation. Suggestion: Use pronouns to refer clearly to antecedents and use natural verb-noun collocations ('hold memories').

× For example, I love cotton scenery.

✓ For example, I love the cotton fields scenery.

'Cotton scenery' is awkward and non-count; likely intended 'cotton fields' or 'cotton-field scenery'. Added definite article 'the' for specificity. Plural 'fields' fits natural usage. Suggestion: Choose correct noun phrases for specific landscapes (cotton fields).

× Uh, at the the halumbe where the sunset.

✓ Uh, at the hill where the sunset looks beautiful.

Original has repeated 'the the', unknown word 'halumbe', and is a sentence fragment. Replaced with a plausible noun 'hill' and completed sentence to convey meaning: 'where the sunset looks beautiful.' Suggestion: Avoid filler word repetition, use clear nouns, and complete the sentence with a verb phrase.