Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and unclear phrases (e.g., “car flooring”). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “scenery”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes like sunsets and mountains. For example, I often photograph open green fields and tree-lined hills because their peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and capture natural light effectively.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then support it with specific reasons and one concise example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid repetition. Complete your sentences and remove fillers.

Example: I prefer rural views because they offer more greenery and open space, which I find calming. For example, walking among fields and flowering trees helps me relax and refresh my mind, so I often choose the countryside for photography.

Suggestion: Answer directly and then give a concise reason and a specific example. Avoid hesitation and incomplete lists. Use clear linking words (however, because, for example) and finish your thoughts fully.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy exploring traditional places and familiar landscapes. For example, cities in Pakistan such as Lahore and Islamabad offer historic sites and scenic parks that I like to photograph on weekends.

× I like taking pictures of different views specially if uh there is sunset, mountains, open spacious greenery as because nature is peaceful for me and I feel relaxed for capturing the pictures.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, especially if there is a sunset, mountains, or open spacious greenery, because nature is peaceful for me and I feel relaxed when capturing pictures.

Errors: 'specially' should be 'especially' (word choice/adverb). 'as because' is redundant — use 'because'. Missing articles: 'a sunset' required. 'for capturing the pictures' is awkward; use 'when capturing pictures'. Suggestions: use 'especially' for emphasis, include necessary articles before singular countable nouns, avoid redundant connectors, and use 'when' to link the reason for feeling relaxed to the action of capturing pictures.

× Whenever I visit new place I just take picture of that new place like car flooring.

✓ Whenever I visit a new place, I just take pictures of that place, such as interesting details like car flooring.

Errors: missing article before 'new place' ('a new place'); singular/plural mismatch 'take picture' should be 'take pictures'; unclear phrase 'like car flooring' needs clarification and parallel structure. Suggestions: include articles for singular countable nouns, make noun number consistent with verb, and rephrase vague examples to be clear.

× I prefer views in rural areas because there are more greenery, trees, flowers, crops that look peaceful.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is more greenery, and the trees, flowers, and crops look peaceful.

Errors: 'more greenery' is uncountable and should use singular verb 'is' not 'are'; missing article 'the' before listed items improves clarity. Suggestions: treat 'greenery' as uncountable (use 'is more greenery' or 'more green spaces'), ensure subject-verb agreement with uncountable nouns, and separate lists with proper articles or commas.

× As I talk about earlier, I love nature and it is very peaceful for me.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I love nature, and it is very peaceful for me.

Errors: 'As I talk about earlier' is ungrammatical; use 'As I mentioned earlier'. Also add comma before conjunction 'and'. Suggestions: use correct reporting verbs such as 'mentioned' for past reference and include punctuation to separate clauses.

× Whenever I just visit any greenery place umm, I feel very refreshed and.

✓ Whenever I visit any green place, I feel very refreshed.

Errors: unnecessary adverb 'just' and filler 'umm' should be removed; 'greenery place' is unnatural — use 'green place' or 'place with greenery'; sentence ends incomplete with 'and.' Suggestions: remove fillers, choose natural collocations, and complete the sentence or remove the trailing conjunction.

× I prefer both, but uh, most of the time I just want to, uh, visit views in my country.

✓ I prefer both, but most of the time I want to visit sights in my country.

Errors: 'visit views' is unnatural; use 'visit sights' or 'see views' or 'visit places'. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'just'. Suggestions: choose correct collocation for visiting attractions and avoid hesitation markers in written responses.

× I just explore traditional places and, uh, places like, uh, there are many places in Pakistan where have beautiful views like Lahore, Islamabad and.

✓ I explore traditional places. There are many places in Pakistan with beautiful views, such as Lahore and Islamabad.

Errors: run-on sentence with repetitions and fillers; 'where have beautiful views' is missing subject and verb — should be 'which/that have' or 'with beautiful views.' Sentence ends incomplete after 'and.' Suggestions: split into two clear sentences, remove filler words, use correct relative clauses ('that have' or 'with'), and finish the list or omit the trailing 'and.'