Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, use correct grammar and specific vocabulary to describe what you photograph. Limit response to 2–3 sentences and give one clear example. For instance, say what types of views you prefer (landscapes, cityscapes), and briefly why.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I mostly photograph natural landscapes like mountains and rivers because I like capturing wide open spaces and changing light during sunrise or sunset.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (urban or rural), then support it with 1–2 clear reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid pronunciation errors and inappropriate words. Use accurate vocabulary like 'urban areas' and specific features you like (architecture, street life).

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and busy street scenes. For example, I like photographing old buildings and colorful markets since they offer many interesting details.

Suggestion: Answer clearly whether you prefer one over the other or both, and explain briefly with a reason and example. Use correct tense and pronouns, and avoid repeating words. Keep response to 2–3 sentences and include a linking word (however, also).

Example: I like photographing views both in my own country and abroad. At home I capture familiar landscapes and cultural scenes, but when I travel I take photos of new places and architectures to remember the trip.

× I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I go to visit at different place and I taking pictures, uh, most of, uh, photos, uh, such as, umm, Boeing naturals, uh, that's it.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I visit different places and take photos of natural scenery.

Multiple preposition errors: 'go to visit at different place' should be 'visit different places' (no 'go to' or 'at' needed with 'visit' here); 'I taking pictures' lacks auxiliary and should be 'take photos'. Also 'Boeing naturals' is unclear and likely intended as 'natural scenery'. Suggest using simple verbs and correct prepositions: 'visit different places' and 'take photos of natural scenery'. Use plural 'places' to match 'different'.

× I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I go to visit at different place and I taking pictures, uh, most of, uh, photos, uh, such as, umm, Boeing naturals, uh, that's it.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I visit different places and take photos of natural scenery.

The phrase 'I taking pictures' incorrectly uses the present participle without an auxiliary. In this context, use the base verb 'take' after 'I' for a simple present narration. Replace 'I taking' with 'I take' or restructure the clause: 'when I visit... and take photos.'

× I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I go to visit at different place and I taking pictures, uh, most of, uh, photos, uh, such as, umm, Boeing naturals, uh, that's it.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, such as when I visit different places and take photos of natural scenery.

The phrase 'different place' should be plural 'different places' because 'different' implies more than one location. Also 'most of photos' should be 'most photos' or 'most of my photos'. Ensure noun number matches context.

× When I go to visit it on the holiday then I brings the other countries and when I stay in my country then I bring prefers my country.

✓ When I go on holiday to other countries, I bring my camera; when I stay in my country, I prefer photographing my country.

'I brings' is incorrect for first person singular; the correct form is 'I bring'. The original also mixes verbs and meanings. 'I bring prefers my country' is ungrammatical: 'prefer' should be 'prefer' or 'I prefer photographing my country'. Fix subject-verb agreement and choose verbs that convey the intended meaning.

× I prefer to being in over any years because that is interesting for me sometimes. I like you, prefer the pictures. It is excellent. That's why I prefer being urban idiot.

✓ I prefer being in urban areas because they are interesting to me sometimes. I prefer the pictures of cities; they are excellent. That's why I prefer urban views.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'prefer to being' should be 'prefer being' (no 'to' before gerund), 'in over any years' is unclear and ungrammatical — likely intended 'in urban areas'. 'interesting for me' should be 'interesting to me'. 'I like you, prefer the pictures' is confusing; clarify to 'I prefer pictures of cities'. 'prefer being urban idiot' uses wrong noun and insulting term; intended 'urban views' or 'urban areas'. Replace incorrect prepositions and words for clear meaning.

× I prefer to being in over any years because that is interesting for me sometimes. I like you, prefer the pictures. It is excellent. That's why I prefer being urban idiot.

✓ I prefer being in urban areas because they are interesting to me sometimes. I prefer pictures of cities; they are excellent. That's why I prefer urban views.

'Prefer to being' incorrectly combines 'to' with a gerund; after 'prefer' use either 'to' + infinitive ('prefer to be') or gerund alone ('prefer being'). Here 'prefer being' is appropriate. Also restructure sentences to use correct present participle or infinitive forms consistently.

× I prefer being in my country and another country. When I go to visit it on the holiday then I brings the other countries and when I stay in my country then I bring prefers my country.

✓ I prefer being in my country and in other countries. When I go on holiday to other countries, I bring my camera; when I stay in my country, I prefer photographing my country.

'On the holiday' should be 'on holiday' or 'on a holiday'. 'Another country' needs 'other countries' or 'another country' consistently; better: 'other countries'. Articles are misused or missing. Also fix verbs as noted earlier. Use 'on holiday' (British English) or 'on a holiday' (American) appropriately.

× I prefer to being in over any years because that is interesting for me sometimes. I like you, prefer the pictures. It is excellent. That's why I prefer being urban idiot.

✓ I prefer being in urban areas because they are interesting to me sometimes. I prefer pictures of cities; they are excellent. That's why I prefer urban views.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear clauses ('in over any years', 'I like you, prefer the pictures'). Reorganize into clear sentences with subject-verb-object order and coherent ideas: state preference, state reason, give an example, and conclude. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like you, prefer the pictures.

✓ I prefer pictures of cities.

'I like you' is an incorrect and irrelevant pronoun use here; it seems the speaker meant 'I prefer' or 'I like' (something), not addressing 'you'. Remove the unintended direct address and use the correct object: 'pictures of cities'.