Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Use linking words (for example, "so", "because") and correct verb forms. Be specific about what you like photographing and why.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of places I visit because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph landscapes and interesting architecture with my phone, since those scenes are eye-catching and easy to capture.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first (urban or rural), then add 1–2 supporting reasons using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid filler words and unfinished sentences. Provide specific details or examples about what you like in rural or urban views.

Example: I prefer photographing rural areas because they are calmer and less crowded, so I can capture natural scenes without people in the frame. For instance, I like taking pictures of fields and small village houses during sunset for their peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Answer directly and concisely. If you have limited experience, say so and explain how that affects your preference. Use correct tense and complete sentences, and give a specific example of a memorable photo from your country or a hypothetical preference for foreign views.

Example: I usually prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad much, so most of my photos are local. For example, I often photograph historic monuments and scenic parks at home because they are unique memories for me.

× To be honest, I definitely like of taking any places where I visited.

✓ To be honest, I definitely like taking photos of the places I visit.

The phrase 'like of taking' is incorrect; after 'like' use the gerund form without 'of' (Rule: verb + -ing). 'Any places where I visited' has tense and article issues; use 'the places I visit' for habitual action.

× Most of the time I try to take picture whenever I saw any kind of eye-catching views it it mostly like I used to take picture by my phone and it wouldn't feel.

✓ Most of the time I try to take pictures whenever I see any eye-catching view; I usually take photos with my phone because it feels natural.

Multiple problems: 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' for general habit (singular/plural). 'Whenever I saw' mixes past with present habit; use present 'see' (present participle/present tense). 'it it mostly like I used to take picture by my phone' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I usually take photos with my phone'. 'wouldn't feel' is unclear—changed to 'feels natural'. Correct the verb forms and plurality.

× Most of the time I try to take picture of rural areas, like if I say about urban areas, it's a really busy and, uh, hectic for every individual to take any places photos.

✓ Most of the time I try to take pictures of rural areas; if I talk about urban areas, they are really busy and hectic, so it is hard for individuals to take photos there.

Use plural 'pictures' when referring generally (singular/plural). 'If I say about urban areas' is unnatural; use 'if I talk about'. 'It's a really busy' mismatches subject; use 'they are' for 'urban areas' (subject-verb agreement). 'Take any places photos' is incorrect order—use 'take photos there'.

× Like sometimes we have some people who are roaming around the area.

✓ Sometimes there are people roaming around the area.

Sentence was wordy and informal. 'We have some people who are roaming' is awkward; use existential 'there are' and present participle 'roaming' for clarity and correct structure.

× But if I say about rural area, that time it was quite calm and.

✓ But if I talk about rural areas, they are usually quite calm.

Original mixes past 'was' with a general statement; use present tense 'are' for habitual descriptions. Also use plural 'rural areas' and complete the sentence instead of trailing off.

× It depends like as I didn't visited any country the the purpose I most of the time I took picture of my own country whenever I visited any kind of places.

✓ It depends; since I haven't visited any other countries, most of the time I take pictures in my own country whenever I visit places.

Incorrect past form 'didn't visited' should be 'didn't visit' or better 'haven't visited' for experience up to now (past tense issue). 'Most of the time I took picture' mixes past with present—use present 'take pictures'. Ensure correct verb forms and plural 'pictures'.

× If the places is really amazing or astonishing that I might try to capture those areas photo as a memory and whenever I get.

✓ If a place is really amazing or astonishing, I might try to capture a photo of it as a memory.

Multiple errors: 'places is' should be 'a place is' (singular/plural and subject-verb agreement). 'Those areas photo' is incorrect noun order; use 'a photo of it' or 'photos of those places'. The trailing 'and whenever I get' is incomplete and removed. Correct adjective/adverb placement and sentence completion.