Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 発音と流暢さを改善し、重複や文法ミスを直してください。具体的には「I I」「when I travel travel」「sharing picture」を修正し、短く明確な主題文の後に1〜2文で理由や例を付け加える練習をしましょう。また、linking word（for example, because, and）を使って文を繋げると自然に聞こえます。

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes when I travel because I like to remember places and share them on social media. For example, I usually post city skylines or seaside sunsets to give friends a sense of the trip.

Suggestion: 発音・語彙の選択と文の構造に注意してください。意味が不明瞭な語（"Avalia"など）や余分な語を避け、明確な比較表現を使いましょう。トピック文で好みを示し、becauseで理由を述べ、具体例（夜景の特徴）を付けると改善されます。

Example: I prefer urban views to rural ones. I especially like the night skyline because the city’s lights and tall buildings create a dramatic scene that you don’t usually see in the countryside. For example, the illuminated bridges and skyscrapers make night photos more striking.

Suggestion: 語彙と文法の誤りを正しましょう（"bills"→"views"または"buildings"、"have have"の削除）。比較をする際は"I prefer X to Y"や"compared to"を正しく使い、具体的な理由や例を添えて一貫性を保ってください。

Example: I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country. Other countries often have different architecture and fresh landscapes, which feel more exotic to me. For instance, I enjoyed photographing historical cathedrals and colorful markets abroad because they look very different from places at home.

× Yes, I I like to take pictures when I travel, when I travel travel and I enjoy sharing picture on social media.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures when I travel, and I enjoy sharing pictures on social media.

The sentence contained repetition ('I I', 'when I travel travel') and incorrect noun number ('picture' should be plural 'pictures'). Remove duplicated words and make the noun plural to agree with 'take pictures' and 'sharing' which refer to multiple items. Also add the conjunction 'and' to connect the two clauses smoothly. Suggestion: read the sentence aloud to spot repeated words and check noun number consistency. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer use of Avalia because our the because night landscape of our area is more beautiful than rural areas.

✓ I prefer Avalia because the night landscape of our area is more beautiful than that of rural areas.

This sentence has incorrect and redundant words ('prefer use of Avalia', 'our the because') and a pronoun reference issue comparing 'our area' with 'rural areas'. Use 'prefer Avalia' or 'prefer the use of Avalia' (here 'Avalia' assumed as a place) and use 'that of' to refer back to 'night landscape' to make a clear comparison. Remove redundant words. Suggestion: simplify the phrase and use 'that of' when comparing nouns between two entities. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer bills in other countries because other countries have have fresh landscape and magnificent building compared to own country.

✓ I prefer cities in other countries because they have fresh landscapes and magnificent buildings compared to my own country.

Several issues: 'bills' is likely a typo for 'cities'; repetition 'have have'; nouns need plural forms 'landscapes' and 'buildings'; 'own country' should be 'my own country' for correct pronoun use; use 'they' to refer to 'cities' or 'other countries'. Replace incorrect words and ensure agreement in number. Suggestion: check for typos and ensure pronouns like 'my' are included for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12