Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has several issues: unnatural word choices (“wheels” instead of “views” or a specific subject), hesitations (“umm”), grammar errors (“I went to abroad”), and some redundancy. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, use correct vocabulary, avoid filler words, and give one or two brief supporting details. Also keep sentences concise (max 5).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of views. When I travel abroad, I usually photograph landscapes, historic buildings, and local street art because they capture the culture and atmosphere of a place.

Suggestion: This answer is clearer and gives reasons, but still has vocabulary mistakes (“wheels” instead of “views”), minor grammar errors (plural/singular: “mountain” → “mountains”), and could use a linking word to connect ideas. Improve by correcting vocabulary, adding a linking word, and providing one specific example to support your preference.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded. For example, I enjoy looking at green fields and mountain ranges, which I find more relaxing than the busy streets of a city.

Suggestion: The answer communicates ideas but contains unclear phrases (“mountain walls”, “travel award”, “white goulash”), grammar and collocation errors, and lacks clear structure. To improve, choose precise vocabulary, correct collocations, and give a brief contrast with a linking phrase. Avoid invented terms and describe specific examples of what you see or enjoy.

Example: I like both, but at home I especially enjoy the northern mountains because of the fresh air and peaceful scenery. When I travel abroad, I prefer places with rivers where I can photograph traditional fishing villages and local markets.

× Umm, yet I like taking picture of different wheels.

✓ Umm, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student used 'picture' (singular) but means plural general activity, so plural 'pictures' is needed (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). Also 'wheels' is incorrect word choice for 'views'; replace with 'views'. Use 'yet' is unnecessary and awkward, remove it. Suggested improvement: use 'pictures' for general statements about the hobby and choose the correct noun 'views'.

× When I went to abroad I usually took a picture of wheels or landscape or umm, the buildings or arts around there.

✓ When I went abroad I usually took pictures of wheels, landscapes, buildings, or artworks around there.

Use 'went abroad' not 'went to abroad' (preposition error and past tense is fine). 'Usually' with past tense is acceptable if referring to a past habit, so keep past simple 'took'. Change singular 'a picture' to plural 'pictures' to match list of things (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 and 14). 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'. 'Arts' is better as 'artworks' or 'art'. Suggested improvement: fix preposition 'abroad', pluralize nouns when listing multiple items, and use consistent noun forms.

× I prefer wheels in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded than the cities.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded than cities.

Replace 'wheels' with correct noun 'views' (word choice error categorized under quantifiers here for plurality) and use 'cities' without 'the' for general comparison (Grammar Problem Type ID 14 and 17). 'They are quieter' correctly matches plural 'views' or 'rural areas'; keep pronoun agreement. Suggested improvement: choose correct vocabulary 'views' and omit 'the' when comparing general categories.

× I also like the countryside scenery such as green fields and mountain, which I can find more relaxing and beautiful.

✓ I also like the countryside scenery, such as green fields and mountains, which I find more relaxing and beautiful.

'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match 'fields' in a list (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Remove 'can' because 'I find' is the natural expression for opinion. Add comma before 'such as' for clarity. Suggested improvement: pluralize items in lists and use simple verbs for expressing opinions.

× I like both but in my country I prefer the mountain walls in the north of the country because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery.

✓ I like both, but in my country I prefer the mountain areas in the north because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery.

'Mountain walls' is unnatural; use 'mountain areas' or 'mountain ranges' (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). Remove redundant 'of the country'. Add comma after 'both'. Suggested improvement: choose natural collocations like 'mountain areas' and avoid repetition.

× When I travel award I usually prefer rivers area as like white goulash and traditional local life.

✓ When I travel abroad, I usually prefer river areas because I like white houses and traditional local life.

Multiple errors: 'award' should be 'abroad' (spelling), 'rivers area' should be 'river areas' (number and word order), 'as like' is ungrammatical — use 'because I like'. 'white goulash' makes no sense in context; likely intended 'white houses' or a local feature, so replace with 'white houses' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggested improvement: proofread for spelling, use correct collocations 'travel abroad' and 'river areas', and express reasons with 'because I like' or 'because of'.