Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and grammatical errors (e.g., "look after" and tense mistakes).

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views, especially while traveling. For example, when I visit a new city I take photos of the skyline and local streets so I can remember the atmosphere later; looking at these pictures at home always brings back happy memories.

Suggestion: Make your response grammatically correct and more specific. Use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two precise reasons with linking words. Replace vague phrases (e.g., "hustling lives") with natural expressions and correct word order.

Example: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and enjoy its lively atmosphere. For example, I like photographing busy streets and people in cafés, since these scenes make me feel energetic and connected to city life.

Suggestion: Keep the answer direct and avoid repetition. Use a topic sentence, a clear reason, and specific examples with linking words. Correct small errors (duplicate word, tense and article use) to sound more fluent.

Example: I prefer landscapes in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad and I know the scenery here better. For example, since China is so vast, I plan to visit mountain ranges in Yunnan and the coastline in Fujian to photograph their distinct landscapes.

× The photos that I take can help me capture the scenery and keep lasting memories of those trips, and then I can look after when I came home to feel the happiness at that time.

✓ The photos that I take help me capture the scenery and keep lasting memories of those trips, and then I can look at them when I come home to feel the happiness I had then.

Issues: unnecessary modal 'can' with two verbs and incorrect verb forms 'look after' and 'came'. 'Look after' means to care for; the intended phrase is 'look at (them)'. Tense should be present when describing a habitual ability: 'I can look at them when I come home' or simple present 'I look at them when I come home'. Also 'came' is past; use 'come' to match present-time reference, and 'at that time' is awkward; use 'I had then' or 'I felt then'. Suggestion: use 'help' without 'can' for clarity, use 'look at them', and use present tense 'come' and past reference 'I had then'.

× I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and raised in the city, so I'm more familiar with the urban views and also I like the hustling lives in city.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and raised in the city, so I'm more familiar with urban scenes and I also like the hustle and bustle of city life.

Issues: 'the urban views' is wordy; 'urban scenes' is more natural. 'the hustling lives in city' is ungrammatical: 'hustling' is adjective; correct idiom is 'the hustle and bustle of city life'. Also add 'the' before 'city' if referring to a particular city or use 'city life' generally. Suggestion: use established collocations 'hustle and bustle' and 'city life'.

× For example, I love seeing people or I love myself staying in Cafe.

✓ For example, I love seeing people, and I also enjoy spending time in cafés.

Issues: 'I love myself staying in Cafe' is incorrect reflexive/pronoun use and unnatural phrasing. Use 'I enjoy' or 'I like' plus gerund 'spending time' and plural or accented 'cafés'. Also add conjunction 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: use 'I enjoy spending time in cafés' or 'I like sitting in a café'.

× It makes me feel like the life is meaningful.

✓ It makes me feel that life is meaningful.

Issue: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'life' when speaking about life in general. Use 'life' without an article. Also 'feel like' followed by clause is informal; 'feel that' is clearer here. Suggestion: say 'It makes me feel that life is meaningful.'

× I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and raised in the city, so I'm more familiar with the urban views and also I like the hustling lives in city.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I was born and raised in the city, so I'm more familiar with urban scenes and I also like the hustle and bustle of city life.

Issue: 'was born and raised' is correct past tense, but 'I'm more familiar' mixes past and present appropriately. No change needed to tense here; repeated sentence corrected for other issues. Keep past tense for birth/raising and present for current preferences. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense usage as applied.

× I haven't travelled abroad abroad, so I'm more familiar with the scenery here.

✓ I haven't travelled abroad, so I'm more familiar with the scenery here.

Issue: duplicated word 'abroad abroad' is a typographical or repetition error. Remove the duplicate. Suggestion: proofread to remove accidental repetitions.

× And because China is so large, I still want to visit many other cities in my own country and the regions first.

✓ And because China is so large, I still want to visit many other cities and regions in my own country first.

Issue: 'and the regions' is awkward; better to say 'many other cities and regions in my own country'. Also place 'first' at the end for clarity. Suggestion: use natural word order 'visit many other cities and regions in my own country first.'

× For example, I'd love to see mountains in Yunnan or the coastline in Fujian.

✓ For example, I'd love to see the mountains in Yunnan or the coastline in Fujian.

Issue: use of definite article 'the' before 'mountains' when referring to specific well-known regions is more natural: 'the mountains in Yunnan'. Keep 'the coastline' as provided. Suggestion: use definite article when referring to specific geographical features in a region.