Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and organized: open with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Also use correct words (e.g. “scenery” instead of “summary”) and finish the sentence. Aim for 2–3 sentences, each concise.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing natural scenery because photos help me remember special moments and the atmosphere of a place, for example, a sunset over a lake that reminds me of a peaceful holiday.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer, avoid repetition and incorrect words. Provide one clear reason and a brief example using a linking word (e.g. “because” or “so”). Keep it to 2 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g. ‘less stressful’, ‘peaceful’, ‘countryside’).

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less stressful than cities. For example, I enjoy looking at green fields and small villages, which help me relax after a busy week.

Suggestion: State your preference directly and give a specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and hesitations, and use correct phrasing (e.g. ‘explore other countries’). Provide one concrete example of what you want to see or experience abroad.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering new landscapes and cultures. For instance, I would love to see the architecture and coastal scenery in Spain, which are very different from what I usually see at home.

× Of course I do. I love capturing, umm, beautiful natural summary, uh, when whatever I tell, uh, I'm taking photos, help us, we help us, umm, taking photos, help us, we, we remember the special moments and.

✓ Of course I do. I love capturing beautiful natural scenery because taking photos helps us remember special moments.

Multiple issues: unclear noun choice ('summary' -> 'scenery') and a fragmented, repetitive sentence structure. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Combine ideas into one clear sentence, use correct noun 'scenery', and correct subject-verb agreement 'taking photos helps'. Suggestion: remove fillers (umm, uh), avoid repetition, and join clauses logically with 'because'.

× Personally, I prefer rural areas because it is, uh, comfortable and umm, and more less and less stressful than urban. So I prefer to jewelry.

✓ Personally, I prefer rural areas because they are more comfortable and less stressful than urban areas. So I prefer travelling there.

Problems include wrong adjective use and wrong collocation 'more less and less' and wrong noun 'jewelry' unrelated to context. Classified as 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13). Use comparative 'more comfortable' and 'less stressful', and match plural subject 'rural areas' with plural pronoun 'they'. Also replace unrelated phrase with appropriate verb 'travelling'. Suggestions: choose correct comparative forms and relevant vocabulary, and remove fillers.

× I prefer, uh, I prefer in other countries, uh, because uh, uh, I do uh, we in our my own country. So, oh, I want to ex explore the another country.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because I have already traveled a lot in my own country, so I want to explore another country.

Problems: confusing pronouns and word order ('we in our my own country') and article misuse 'the another country'. Classified as 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) and related sentence structure errors. Clarify subject and tense: use 'I' consistently, correct verb phrase 'travel to other countries', use 'another country' without 'the'. Suggestions: state one clear reason, use consistent pronouns, correct article use, and remove fillers.