Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g. 'makes me feel' not 'make me' or 'feel me'). Avoid repetition of phrases like 'different views'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me relax and clears my mind. For example, when I photograph a park or a skyline, I focus on colors and light, which calms me and improves my mood.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason that is relevant and specific. Avoid unclear phrases like 'get promotion' and incorrect plural forms. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and limit to two or three sentences.

Example: I prefer rural areas because their natural scenery is more peaceful and photogenic. For instance, open fields and traditional villages provide unique compositions that attract more attention on my social media.

Suggestion: Speak more fluently and correct grammar (e.g. 'there are a lot of natural views' and 'have many positive aspects'). Remove filler words like 'uh' and give a specific example or comparison to strengthen the answer.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has many dramatic natural landscapes, such as waterfalls and mountains. For example, the coastal cliffs here offer cinematic views that I rarely see elsewhere.

× it make me more relaxed and it feel me comfortable with taking picture of different views.

✓ it makes me more relaxed and it makes me feel comfortable taking pictures of different views.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'it' requires the third person singular form 'makes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 2/27). 'Feel' must be used with 'makes me feel' rather than 'feel me'. Use the gerund 'taking' without 'with' and plural 'pictures' for general plural reference (fixes plural/article issues). Suggestion: always match singular subjects with verbs ending in -s and use 'make someone feel' + adjective, and use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally.

× It shows my psychology about things.

✓ It shows my attitude toward things.

Word choice and preposition: 'psychology about things' is awkward and unidiomatic. 'Attitude toward' or 'attitude about' is more natural. Also maintain third person singular verb 'shows' is correct; main issue is lexical choice and preposition (Grammar Problem Type ID 11/2). Suggestion: use natural collocations such as 'attitude toward' or 'feelings about'.

× I mostly prefer rural areas because with the help of my views it may get promotion or get noticed by many other different peoples.

✓ I mostly prefer rural areas because my photos of those views may get promoted or get noticed by many different people.

Prepositions and word choice: 'with the help of my views' is unclear; use 'my photos of those views'. 'May get promotion' should be passive 'may get promoted'. 'Peoples' is incorrect for plural of 'people' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11/14). Suggestion: use 'people' as the plural form and 'get promoted' for passive promotion; place modifiers close to the nouns they modify.

× So I like to prefer my views in rural areas.

✓ So I prefer the views in rural areas.

Redundant and incorrect verb choice: 'like to prefer' is redundant—choose either 'like' or 'prefer'. 'My views' is unclear; 'the views' or 'rural views' is clearer. Also 'prefer' already conveys liking (Grammar Problem Type ID 12/26). Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer' and be specific about what is preferred.

× I prefer views in my own country because, uh, in our country there are lot, a lot of uh, natural views, which is uh, very cinematic and have has many positive aspect.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are a lot of natural sights in our country, which are very cinematic and have many positive aspects.

Article and agreement errors: 'there are lot' needs the article 'a' as 'a lot'. 'Natural views' is better as 'natural sights' or 'scenery'. 'Which is very cinematic' should agree in number with 'sights' so use 'which are'. 'Have has' is incorrect; use 'have'. 'Aspect' should be plural 'aspects' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/27/13). Suggestion: use 'a lot of', ensure subject-verb agreement ('sights... are'), and use plural forms when referring to multiple items.