Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevaplarınız doğal ama akıcılık ve doğruluk sorunları var; tekrar eden kelimeleri ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın, telaffuzu düzeltin (ör. “scanner”, “photography webs” yanlış kullanımlar). Cümle yapısını basit ve net tutun: bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından kısa bir neden veya örnek verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, especially) doğru bağlamda kullanılmalı ve maksimum 4-5 kısa cümle sınırlaması korunmalıdır.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural places, especially seascapes, because I love the colors and light. Taking photos helps me remember special moments and locations, so I often shoot sunsets when I travel.

Suggestion: Cevap açık fakat birçok anlamsız kelime kullanımı ve dilbilgisi hatası var (“scandal”, “if you people”, “waves are.”). Net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından iki kısa destekleyici neden verin. Uygun kelime seçimi (scenery, peaceful, fresh air) ve doğru gramer (subject-verb agreement) üzerinde çalışın.

Example: I prefer rural views because the scenery is more peaceful and there is fresh air. For example, I like mountains and rivers where I can relax away from city noise.

Suggestion: Cevap duygusal ve anlaşılır ama kelime hataları ve tekrarlamalar dikkat çekiyor (“family” yerine familiar, “exported” yerine explored). Gereksiz konuşma seslerini (uh, can you hear?) ve tekrarları çıkarın. Bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp 1–2 destekleyici cümle ve bir kısa örnek verin.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to familiar places. For example, many local spots remind me of childhood family trips, and I still want to explore more of them.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, uh, of natural places because because the scanner is often incredible, uh, especially seascapes.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of natural places because the scenery is often incredible, especially seascapes.

The word 'scanner' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'scenery' to describe landscape views. Additionally, redundant 'because' should be reduced to a single 'because'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' for landscapes and avoid repetition for clarity.

× Taking pictures helps me remember special moments and locations, so I often photography webs and sunsets when I travel.

✓ Taking pictures helps me remember special moments and locations, so I often photograph views and sunsets when I travel.

The verb 'photograph' was incorrectly used as a noun form 'photography' in this sentence and 'webs' is an incorrect word choice; likely intended 'views'. Use the base verb 'photograph' after 'often'. Suggestion: use 'photograph views and sunsets' for correct verb form and meaning.

× I prefer rural areas because of natural scandal like mountains, rivers and fields and if you people see rural areas and more flexible and it can be people peaceful and relaxing.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields; when people see rural areas they feel more relaxed and peaceful.

'Scandal' is the wrong noun; 'scenery' fits the context. The phrase 'if you people see' is ungrammatical—use 'when people see' or 'if people see'. Word order and verb forms were incorrect: 'more flexible' is wrong for describing atmosphere; use 'more relaxed' or 'more peaceful'. Suggestion: choose context-appropriate nouns (scenery) and use simple clauses like 'when people see' and adjectives 'relaxed'/'peaceful'.

× The earth is fresher and the waves are.

✓ The air is fresher and the scenery is calmer.

'The earth is fresher' is odd; native speakers say 'the air is fresher' to describe rural freshness. 'The waves are.' is an incomplete sentence missing an adjective. Provide a complete idea such as 'the scenery is calmer' or 'the waves are gentler.' Suggestion: complete the sentence with an adjective and use natural collocations like 'air is fresher.'

× I prefer in my own country because of, I feel more family with this.

✓ I prefer my own country because I feel more familiar with it.

'Prefer in my own country' incorrectly uses 'in'; say 'I prefer my own country'. 'Feel more family with this' is incorrect—use 'feel more familiar with it'. 'It' refers to 'my country'. Suggestion: use 'familiar with' to express a sense of connection and omit unnecessary prepositions.

× Can you hear?

✓ Can you hear me?

As a standalone question, 'Can you hear?' is incomplete; typically speakers ask 'Can you hear me?' if checking audio. Suggestion: include the object 'me' when checking whether someone can hear you.

× There are lots of beautiful places in my country that I haven't exported yet, but it's my goal.

✓ There are lots of beautiful places in my country that I haven't explored yet, but it's my goal to visit them.

The verb 'exported' is incorrect here; intended verb is 'explored'. Also the clause 'but it's my goal' is vague—clarify with 'to visit them.' Suggestion: use 'explore' for seeing places and complete the purpose phrase.

× Uh, I want to, uh, I want to see other part of my, in my countries local views remind me of my childhood and family trips.

✓ I want to see other parts of my country; local views remind me of my childhood and family trips.

This sentence has multiple errors: 'other part of my' should be plural 'other parts of my country'. 'my countries' lacks apostrophe and is incorrect; use 'my country'. The sentence was run-on; split into two clear sentences. Suggestion: use plural 'parts', correct noun 'country', and separate ideas into two sentences for clarity.