Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and clear: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on specific reasons and an example. Fix common grammar issues (articles, nouns, word order) and use simple linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural landscapes, because they are calming and full of color. For example, I often photograph forests and lakes to capture peaceful atmospheres and changing light.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear reason and one specific detail or comparison. Remove fillers (uh, umm) and correct grammar (use 'the countryside', 'a peaceful atmosphere'). Use a linking word such as 'because' and add a short example or contrast with cities.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and find them more peaceful. For example, I like seeing rolling fields and small villages, which feel quieter and fresher than busy city streets.

Suggestion: Be specific: state your preference clearly and give reasons or an example. Fix grammar (say 'I like the views in my country' or 'I prefer views in my country') and avoid vague phrases like 'many different nice photos'. Mention unique features or personal experience to strengthen the answer.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because its landscapes are very diverse. For instance, we have mountains, beaches and historic towns that I enjoy photographing when I travel around.

× Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different areas. Especially I like to take in photos nature.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different areas. Especially I like to take photos of nature.

The phrase 'take in photos nature' is incorrect word order and uses an unnecessary preposition 'in'. The verb 'take' when used with 'photos' should be 'take photos of nature'. Use 'take photos of nature' or 'take pictures of nature' to be natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: remove the extra preposition and place 'nature' after 'of' as 'take photos of nature'.

× This gives a lot of fresh meaning mind.

✓ This gives me a lot of fresh feeling and clears my mind.

The original sentence has incorrect noun choices and word order: 'fresh meaning mind' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is that nature refreshes feelings and clears the mind. Use a pronoun 'me' as the experiencer and choose appropriate nouns and verbs: 'gives me a fresh feeling' or 'refreshes my mind'. Suggestion: specify the experiencer and use natural collocations like 'refreshes my mind' or 'gives me a fresh feeling'.

× So I like to natures and.

✓ So I like nature.

The phrase 'to natures and' is ungrammatical: 'natures' is plural and unnecessary, and 'to' and 'and' are incorrect here. The simple sentence 'I like nature' conveys the intended meaning. Alternatively, 'So I like natural scenes' could be used. Suggestion: use the uncountable noun 'nature' without 'to' or 'and'.

× I prefer prefer to uh rural areas because I grew up in countryside.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside.

The phrase had a duplicated verb 'prefer prefer' and missing article before 'countryside'. 'Prefer' does not need 'to' before a noun phrase like 'rural areas'; use 'prefer rural areas'. 'Countryside' as a singular noun requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the countryside in general. Suggestion: remove the duplicate word and add 'the' before 'countryside'.

× They are uh, I feel is faithfully situation also, umm a fresh area these areas.

✓ I feel they are peaceful and fresh places.

Original contains incorrect pronoun reference and mixed sentence fragments: 'They are uh, I feel is faithfully situation also' is ungrammatical. 'They' can refer to 'rural areas', but 'I feel is' is incorrect; use 'I feel they are'. 'Faithfully' is the wrong word; likely 'peaceful' or 'quiet' is intended. 'These areas' is redundant. Combine into 'I feel they are peaceful and fresh places.' Suggestion: use correct pronoun agreement and choose appropriate adjectives like 'peaceful' or 'quiet', and restructure into a single coherent sentence.

× I like some my own country's views because they have they are the many different nice photos.

✓ I like some views in my own country because there are many different nice places to photograph.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has awkward structure: 'I like some my own country's views' should be 'I like some views in my own country' or 'some of my country's views'. 'They have they are the many different nice photos' is ungrammatical; 'there are many different nice places to photograph' expresses the intended idea. Use 'there are' for existence and 'places to photograph' instead of 'photos'. Suggestion: use 'some views in my own country' or 'some of my country's views' and the existential 'there are' to introduce 'many different nice places'.