Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify your stance and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I like taking photos") and avoid contradictory phrases ("I don't like" vs "I'm into").

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially of landscapes. For example, I often photograph countryside scenes because I like the natural light and peaceful atmosphere, and I sometimes shoot cityscapes when I travel.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific reason using linking words. Improve grammar (e.g., "I prefer rural areas because"). Add one concise supporting detail or brief example to make your answer more convincing.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling fields and old farmhouses since they create a calm, timeless mood.

Suggestion: Be direct and avoid unclear words ("bows" seems incorrect). State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with an example. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing to express emotions (e.g., "connects with me more").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and evoke strong memories. For example, seeing the hills near my hometown always reminds me of family outings, so I feel more emotionally connected to those landscapes.

× Yeah, I don't like take pictures.

✓ Yeah, I don't like taking pictures.

After 'like' when expressing preferences with a verb, use the gerund (-ing) form. 'Don't like take' is incorrect; use 'don't like taking'. Suggestion: Use 'like doing' for general preferences (I like taking pictures).

× I'm so into photography.

✓ I'm really into photography.

'So into' is informal and not ungrammatical, but 'really into' is more natural. No verb form error here; kept meaning while improving register. Suggestion: Use 'really into' or 'very into' in spoken English.

× I like take pictures for different kinds of view, like rural areas or countryside views.

✓ I like taking pictures of different kinds of views, such as rural areas or countryside scenes.

Same gerund issue after 'like': use 'taking' not 'take'. Also preposition 'of' fits with 'pictures of views' and 'such as' is clearer than 'like' repetition. 'Views' should be plural to match 'different kinds'. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures of' and pluralize countable nouns.

× It depends on where I am.

✓ It depends on where I am.

This sentence is correct. No change needed. Included to show no error. Suggestion: None.

× While for me I prefer rural areas like the countryside views cause the natural connects me more.

✓ For me, I prefer rural areas, like the countryside, because nature connects with me more.

'While' at the start is unnecessary and confusing here; use 'For me' or drop it. 'Cause' is informal and should be 'because'. 'The natural' is incorrect; use 'nature'. 'Connects me' is incorrect collocation; use 'connects with me' or 'resonates with me'. Also 'countryside views' can be simplified to 'the countryside'. Suggestion: Use 'because' for explanations, correct noun 'nature', and 'connects with' for emotional connection.

× Well I would say I like bows but the views in my country connects me more and give me more feelings about emotions and feelings.

✓ Well, I would say I like both, but the views in my country connect with me more and give me stronger emotions.

'Bows' is likely a misspelling of 'both'. 'Connects' should be 'connect' to agree with plural subject 'the views' (subject-verb agreement, also ID 27), and 'connect with me' is the correct collocation. 'Give me more feelings about emotions and feelings' is redundant and awkward; replace with 'give me stronger emotions' or 'evoke stronger feelings'. Suggestion: Correct spelling to 'both', ensure subject-verb agreement ('views connect'), and use concise phrase 'evoke stronger emotions'.