Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, make the language more concise, avoid small errors (e.g., “look back at” instead of “look up”), and add one specific example to make your response more vivid. Keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often take photos during family trips and later create photo albums to remember the experience. It’s always rewarding to look back at those images.

Suggestion: The answer expresses preference clearly but has grammar mistakes and unnatural word choice (e.g., “pray” should be “prefer”; verb forms and articles need correction). To improve, use correct verbs, fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, gerund vs. infinitive), and add a brief specific reason or example. Use a linking word like “because” appropriately.

Example: I prefer countryside views because rustic scenery calms me down and makes me feel relaxed. For example, I enjoy walking through nearby forests on weekends to clear my mind and breathe fresh air.

Suggestion: Good balance and reasoning. To improve, combine sentences to sound more fluent, avoid redundancy (e.g., “also” and “too”), and use more precise vocabulary (“scenery” instead of “sceneries”). Add a concise example of a place at home and one abroad to make it specific.

Example: I appreciate both. China has many beautiful landscapes, such as the karst peaks in Guilin, which I love. However, I’d also like to visit other countries to experience different cultures, for example seeing the architecture in Europe.

× I love to take pictures of different views.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views.

When a verb follows verbs like love, like, hate, prefer, both the infinitive and the -ing form can be possible, but 'love taking' is more natural and idiomatic in this context. Use 'taking' to emphasize the activity as a general habit.

× I think it's a great way to save all the memories and it's always rewarding to look up those pictures again in the future.

✓ I think it's a great way to save memories, and it's always rewarding to look back at those pictures in the future.

'Save all the memories' is wordy; 'save memories' is more natural. 'Look up' is incorrect for reviewing pictures; use 'look back at'. Also combine clauses with a comma and 'and' for clarity.

× I pray for the countryside views because rustic scenery can always calm me down and making me feel relaxing.

✓ I prefer the countryside views because rustic scenery can always calm me down and make me feel relaxed.

'Pray for' is incorrect in this context; use 'prefer'. After 'can', use the base form 'make', not 'making'. Use adjective 'relaxed' rather than 'relaxing' to describe how you feel.

× I really appreciate nature and forest that's why I think rural areas are better place for me.

✓ I really appreciate nature and forests, so I think rural areas are a better place for me.

Run-on sentence caused by missing connector; replace the informal 'that's why' with 'so' and add articles/plural: 'forests' (plural) and 'a better place'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× I really appreciate nature and forest that's why I think rural areas are better place for me.

✓ I really appreciate nature and forests, so I think rural areas are a better place for me.

'Forest' should be plural 'forests' when speaking generally. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'better place'.

× I really appreciate nature and forest that's why I think rural areas are better place for me.

✓ I really appreciate nature and forests, so I think rural areas are a better place for me.

The noun phrase 'better place' requires an article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'a better place'.

× I appreciate both.

✓ I appreciate both.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. 'Both' correctly refers to two options mentioned in the question.

× There are many beautiful sceneries in my country because China is a large country with lots of landscapes.

✓ There are many beautiful scenes in my country because China is a large country with many landscapes.

'Scenery' is generally an uncountable noun; use 'scenes' or keep 'scenery' without plural -ies. Also use 'many' instead of 'lots of' for more formal phrasing, though 'lots of' is acceptable in speech.

× But I also want to visit other countries too because the world is big and I want to explore different cultures.

✓ But I also want to visit other countries because the world is big and I want to explore different cultures.

Using both 'also' and 'too' is redundant. Remove one (here 'too') to make the sentence concise. Tense and meaning remain appropriate.