Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/form errors (e.g., "capture" → "capturing" or "capture").

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and family gatherings, which always bring back pleasant memories when I look at them later.

Suggestion: Answer directly (urban or rural) with a clear reason, and use linking words to organise details. Use correct noun forms and prepositions (e.g., "there are mountains/trees/birds"), avoid repeating words, and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic. For instance, there are many trees, mountains and birds in the countryside, so I like to photograph wildlife and landscapes when I visit those areas.

Suggestion: State clearly whether you prefer your own country or others, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct expressions ("my own country" not "the own country") and correct nouns ("waterfalls" instead of "falls"). Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel a strong connection to them. For example, in Salem there are dams, zoos, mountains and waterfalls, and I especially enjoy photographing the waterfalls because of their dramatic scenery.

× That's why I am capture capturing that face.

✓ That's why I capture that face. OR That's why I am capturing that face.

The student mixed base verb and -ing form ('capture capturing'), causing redundancy. Use either simple present 'capture' for habitual actions or present continuous 'am capturing' for an action happening now. Choose based on intended meaning.

× Then I am enjoying that moment.

✓ Then I enjoy that moment. OR Then I am enjoying that moment now.

The phrase 'I am enjoying' is acceptable for a current action, but in a description of habits use simple present 'I enjoy'. Ensure tense matches whether the student means a habitual feeling or a momentary one.

× I need to capture in the in the same time it is remembered to my memory, it is the one of the memorable moment.

✓ I need to capture it at the same time so it will be remembered; it is one of my most memorable moments.

The original is unclear and contains word order and preposition errors. Use 'capture it at the same time' and 'so it will be remembered' for clarity. Replace 'the one of the memorable moment' with 'one of my most memorable moments' for idiomatic expression.

× That's why I am capturing and.

✓ That's why I am capturing it.

The sentence is incomplete and repeats -ing unnecessarily. Provide the object 'it' and remove trailing 'and' to form a complete clause with present continuous.

× I always prepare you in urban areas because it is the beautiful view in the urban.

✓ I always prefer urban areas because they have beautiful views.

'Prepare you' is wrong; likely 'prefer' was intended. 'In the urban' is incorrect — use 'urban areas' or 'the city'. Also adjust subject-verb agreement: 'they have beautiful views.'

× Lots of mountains there in the mountain, lots of trees there in the trees, lots of birds is there.

✓ There are many mountains, many trees, and many birds there.

Word order and prepositions are incorrect. Use 'There are' for existence and plural nouns without redundant 'in the'. Also correct verb agreement: 'birds are' not 'birds is'.

× I like to capture capture the birds in my own eyes.

✓ I like to capture images of birds with my own eyes. OR I like to photograph birds.

The repeated 'capture' is an error. 'Capture the birds in my own eyes' is unnatural; use 'photograph birds' or 'capture images of birds' and avoid literal 'in my own eyes.'

× Seeing that moment I am enjoying very lot.

✓ When I see that moment, I enjoy it a lot.

Use simple present 'I enjoy' for habitual reactions and correct adverb placement: 'a lot' after the verb. 'Very lot' is ungrammatical.

× I always would like to prepare in one country because you are very beautiful in the own country.

✓ I would always like to stay in my own country because it is very beautiful.

The original misuses 'would like' with 'always' and 'prepare'. Replace 'prepare' with 'stay' or 'live', and use 'it is very beautiful' to refer to the country. Avoid addressing 'you' incorrectly.

× In my place in the Salem, it's a there it was there are dams and zoos and mountains and falls.

✓ In my town Salem, there are dams, zoos, mountains, and waterfalls.

Remove unnecessary pronouns 'it's a there it was there'. Use 'there are' for listing plural places and use 'waterfalls' instead of 'falls' for clarity.

× Everything it was there.

✓ Everything is there.

'Everything it was there' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'Everything is there' or 'All of these are there.' Ensure tense matches the intended meaning.

× It is the beautiful to capture the picture in the falls.

✓ It is beautiful to take pictures at the waterfalls.

'The beautiful' misuses the article and adjective. Use 'beautiful' without 'the' and use 'take pictures at' and 'waterfalls' for natural phrasing.