Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “sky scanner scenery.”

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of mountains because their shapes and colors inspire me and make me feel energetic. I also enjoy capturing dramatic skies at sunrise or sunset, which add mood and contrast to my photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct word choice, and keep relevance. Give a clear reason and one specific example. Avoid irrelevant details unless they support your answer. Fix vocabulary like “downside” and remove filler sounds.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city lights and the energy at night. For instance, I like photographing illuminated buildings and busy streets, which often inspire ideas for my music composition.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide specific reasons. Replace vague phrasing with concrete examples and avoid hesitations.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different cultures and lifestyles. For example, when I visited Japan I loved the contrast between modern cityscapes and traditional temples, and I also enjoyed trying local foods and hearing new languages.

× I like different view.

✓ I like different views.

The noun 'view' should be plural because 'different' implies more than one; use 'views' to match plurality (subject-verb agreement and count noun usage). Suggestion: use 'different views' whenever referring to multiple kinds of views.

× For example I like Mountain View, it makes me feel more creative and energetic.

✓ For example, I like mountain views; they make me feel more creative and energetic.

Use a comma after 'For example' and make 'Mountain View' lowercase unless referring to a proper noun; here general 'mountain views' is appropriate and plural. Replace the comma splice with a semicolon or separate sentences and change 'it' to 'they' to agree with plural 'views'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent and avoid comma splices.

× And I like sky, sky scanner scenery so I like different view.

✓ And I like the sky and its scenery, so I enjoy different views.

The phrase 'sky scanner scenery' is unclear and ungrammatical; use 'the sky and its scenery' or 'scenic skies'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'sky' and plural 'views' for consistency. Also add a comma before 'so' when joining clauses. Suggestion: choose clear noun phrases and keep number agreement.

× I like urban area because I love downside and I like shiny shiny night view, so it ma ma.

✓ I like urban areas because I love downtown and I like shiny night views.

Use plural 'urban areas' to refer generally, or 'the urban area' for a specific one. 'Downside' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'downtown'. Repeat 'shiny' is unnecessary; use 'shiny night views' (plural) and remove unclear filler 'so it ma ma'. Suggestion: replace incorrect words with correct collocations (downtown, night views) and avoid repetition.

× I'm majoring in classical music composition.

✓ I'm majoring in classical music composition.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context; no change needed. It correctly uses present continuous to describe current studies.

× It makes me feel more creative.

✓ It makes me feel more creative.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'it makes me' appropriately uses the simple present to state a general effect. No change needed.

× I like another country because another country helps me different to acknowledge for example, umm cooking and culture and language in house me.

✓ I like other countries because they help me learn different things, for example cooking, culture, and language at home.

Use 'other countries' instead of 'another country' when speaking generally. 'Helps me different to acknowledge' is ungrammatical; replace with 'help me learn different things'. Use 'they' to refer back to 'countries' (plural). 'At home' expresses learning within my country; 'in house me' is incorrect. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'learn' and correct pronoun number agreement, and list examples with commas.