Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and plural nouns (e.g., "pictures", "when I travel"). Avoid filler sounds (uh) to sound more fluent.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel to distant places I take many photos to remember where I have been, and I often share the best shots with my friends and family.

Suggestion: Provide a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Correct collocations ("take pictures of the city", "tall buildings", "city scenery"). Remove fillers and avoid vague phrases like "help me to imagination"; instead explain what you imagine.

Example: I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because the tall buildings and vibrant streets create dramatic scenes. For instance, I love photographing city skylines at night because the lights and reflections make the view feel spectacular.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer and explain the reason with a clear example. Fix grammar ("my choice does not depend on whether it's my country or another country"). Use linking words like 'because' or 'depending on' to make your point logical and specific.

Example: I don't prefer one over the other; it depends on the scenery. For example, I might prefer my own country for familiar landscapes, but I choose other countries when they offer unique or spectacular views that I haven't seen before.

× Yes, I do like, uh, taking picture from, uh, different views and especially when I traveling anywhere, uh, distance, I text, picture and photo Remember Me where I went.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures from different viewpoints, and especially when I travel anywhere, I take pictures to remember where I went.

Problems: incorrect gerund/verb forms and word choice. 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' (count noun) and 'from different views' is better as 'from different viewpoints.' 'when I traveling' uses incorrect verb form; after 'when' use a finite verb present tense 'I travel.' 'I text, picture and photo Remember Me' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'I take pictures to remember where I went.' Suggestion: use correct plural nouns, correct verb forms after time conjunctions, and simple verbs like 'take' for capturing photos. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Uh, it's really enjoyable for me and I sometimes I share with my friend and also my family.

✓ It's really enjoyable for me, and sometimes I share them with my friends and my family.

Problems: pluralization and redundant phrasing. 'I sometimes I share' repeats 'I'; remove duplication. 'share with my friend and also my family' should use plural 'friends' if meaning more than one friend and refer to the photos: 'share them with my friends and my family.' Suggestion: remove duplicate subjects and match plural forms to intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to take picture city, uh, for, uh, firstly, they have the highest building and the scenario is really tremendous.

✓ I prefer to take pictures in the city because, first of all, there are tall buildings and the scenery is really impressive.

Problems: wrong preposition and article use, and awkward phrasing. 'take picture city' should be 'take pictures in the city.' 'for, firstly' is incorrect; use 'first of all' or 'firstly.' 'they have the highest building' incorrectly uses 'they' and singular; better 'there are tall buildings.' 'scenario' is wrong word choice; use 'scenery' or 'view.' Suggestion: use 'in' for location, 'there are' to indicate existence, and correct vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× So I really enjoy, especially, uh, I enjoy night views, which, uh, help me to imagination, uh, how glorious, you know?

✓ I really enjoy night views especially; they help me imagine how glorious they are.

Problems: subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb form. 'which... help me to imagination' is wrong—'help' is fine but the structure should be 'help me imagine' (bare infinitive) rather than 'help me to imagination.' Also 'how glorious, you know?' is informal; clearer: 'how glorious they are.' Suggestion: use 'help me imagine' and ensure verbs agree with intended subjects. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I prefer both, uh, actually, uh, my choice is not depend on my country or another country, uh, where I go anywhere is my country or anywhere.

✓ I prefer both. Actually, my choice does not depend on whether it is my country or another country; wherever I go, I enjoy the views.

Problems: incorrect verb form and unclear pronoun/reference. 'my choice is not depend' should be 'my choice does not depend' (auxiliary do for negative). 'where I go anywhere is my country or anywhere' is confusing; replace with 'whether it is my country or another country' and 'wherever I go.' Suggestion: use correct negative construction with 'does not depend' and clearer pronouns/clauses like 'whether' and 'wherever.' Grammar problem type ID: 12

× This time I look, the surrounding environment voice is uh, uh, glorious and which is special Uh, so, uh, it's choice according to.

✓ At the moment, I find the surrounding environment to be glorious and special, so my choice depends on that.

Problems: fragmented and unclear sentence structure. 'I look, the surrounding environment voice is...' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I find the surrounding environment to be...'. 'voice' is incorrect word choice. 'it's choice according to' is incomplete; use 'my choice depends on that.' Suggestion: reorganize into a clear main clause with subject and verb, use correct verbs like 'find' and 'depends on,' and choose appropriate nouns such as 'environment' or 'surroundings.' Grammar problem type ID: 26