Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'also') and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'. Give a brief reason and an example of how you share photos.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it relaxes me and helps me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and landscapes when I travel, and I share the best shots with friends on social media to keep those memories alive.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer (urban or rural), then add two specific reasons using linking words (such as 'because' and 'so'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer rural areas' not 'I prefer to see views in open areas at'). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I love greenery and peaceful natural surroundings. For example, I enjoy hiking in quiet forests and visiting riversides, so I avoid busy cities since they feel too crowded and noisy.

Suggestion: Give a clear, balanced answer and use linking words like 'however' or 'for example'. Correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Be specific about what appeals to you in both domestic and foreign views and include a short example comparing them.

Example: It depends on the view: I often prefer places in my own country because India has many natural landscapes I can easily visit. However, I would like to see views in other countries as well—for example, I would love to photograph the fjords in Norway because they look very different from places at home.

× Yes, I like to taking a picture of different views at its rejuvenate my mind and it's also, uh, become a memorial memorable for me.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views as it rejuvenates my mind and also becomes a memorable keepsake for me.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when expressing preference (rule: like + -ing). 'To taking' is incorrect; use 'taking'. Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures' to match general habit. 'Its rejuvenate' should be 'it rejuvenates' (subject-verb agreement and present tense). 'Become a memorial memorable' is redundant and incorrect: 'becomes a memorable keepsake' is clearer.

× Uh, it's cherish my memory in the upcoming years.

✓ It cherishes my memories in the coming years.

'Cherish' is a verb and needs proper subject-verb agreement: 'it cherishes'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to refer generally; 'upcoming years' is better phrased 'coming years'.

× It's also the different scenery.

✓ It also captures different scenery.

The original is fragmentary and unclear. Adding a verb 'captures' makes a complete sentence that logically connects to taking pictures. 'The different scenery' was awkward; 'different scenery' is idiomatic.

× I also share my photos on the social media with my friends.

✓ I also share my photos on social media with my friends.

The phrase 'the social media' is incorrect; use 'social media' without the definite article. 'On social media' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I prefer to see views in open areas at I love to greenery and I love to nature places.

✓ I prefer seeing views in open areas because I love greenery and natural places.

Use 'prefer' + gerund or 'prefer to' + base verb; 'prefer seeing' or 'prefer to see' are possible. 'I love to greenery' is incorrect: 'greenery' is a noun, so use 'love greenery'. 'I love to nature places' should be 'natural places' (adjective) and 'love' can directly take the noun phrase.

× Umm I I admire to visit natural places.

✓ I admire visiting natural places.

Double 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Admire to visit' is ungrammatical; 'admire' is followed by a gerund ('admire visiting') or better 'I like to visit'/'I enjoy visiting'.

× I avoid to umm cities as it's too rush and I don't like it.

✓ I avoid cities because they are too crowded and I don't like them.

After 'avoid' use the gerund or direct object, not 'to': 'avoid cities'. 'It's too rush' is incorrect: 'rush' is a verb/noun; use 'crowded' or 'busy'. Also maintain pronoun agreement: 'they are... I don't like them'.

× It really depend on the view, but uh, as I belong to India and there's lots of places where there they are close to nature views.

✓ It really depends on the view, but as I am from India, there are many places that are close to natural scenery.

Subject-verb agreement: 'depend' should be 'depends'. 'I belong to India' is unnatural; use 'I am from India'. 'There's lots of places' mixes singular contraction with plural noun; use 'there are many places'. 'Where there they are' is redundant; 'that are close to natural scenery' is clearer.

× So I love to, uh, I admire to explore that one as well.

✓ So I love exploring those places as well.

'I love to, uh, I admire to explore that one' is repetitive and uses incorrect verb patterns. Use 'love exploring' or 'I admire exploring' (better: 'I love exploring those places'). 'That one' is vague; 'those places' matches plural 'places' mentioned earlier.

× But I also heard other countries, they have a beautiful sceneries and beautiful places that admire their beauty.

✓ But I have also heard that other countries have beautiful scenery and places worth admiring.

'I also heard other countries, they have' is ungrammatical; use 'I have heard that other countries have'. 'A beautiful sceneries' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use 'beautiful scenery'. 'Places that admire their beauty' incorrectly suggests places admire; change to 'places worth admiring'.