Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid pauses, repetition and grammar errors (e.g., storage, plural/singular agreement).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I go on a picnic I often take landscape shots and a few selfies to capture the moment, so I can look back on those memories later. However, I sometimes fill up my phone storage because I take many pictures.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons in a logical order using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer many facilities and entertainment. For instance, I can easily go to the cinema, try different restaurants and use reliable public transport, which makes daily life more convenient.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples and reasons. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing (e.g., 'I have experienced at home' is incorrect). Keep it concise and add linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing different cultures and ways of life. For example, when I visited China and Sweden I loved observing their landscapes and daily city life, which felt different from what I experience at home.

× I like to take picture of myself and different views.

✓ I like to take pictures of myself and different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') because the speaker refers to multiple instances of taking photos. Use the plural form when talking about more than one item or repeated actions. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos.

× especially when I go to picnic I, I click pictures of those.

✓ Especially when I go on a picnic, I take pictures of them.

Use the expression 'go on a picnic' (preposition 'on' is required) and prefer 'take pictures' rather than 'click pictures' for natural English. 'Those' referring to views or scenes is better as 'them'. Also capitalize start and remove filler 'I, I'. Suggestion: Say 'go on a picnic' and 'take pictures of them.'

× I click pictures and keep memories and sometime my phone storage was sometime I, I take many pictures on my phone.

✓ I take pictures to keep memories, and sometimes my phone storage becomes full because I take many photos on my phone.

Use consistent present tense 'take' instead of 'click'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Phone storage was' is past; use 'becomes' or 'gets' for current habitual situations. Remove repeated 'I, I'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' and present tense 'becomes full' for habitual actions.

× Stairage was full.

✓ Storage was full.

There is a spelling error: 'Stairage' should be 'storage'. 'Was' indicates past; if referring to a past event this is fine, but if habitual use 'is' or 'becomes'. Suggestion: Correct spelling to 'storage' and choose tense consistent with context (is/was).

× I prefer urban areas because there are many facilities and entertainment I can I can go easily to cinema and find restaurant and many other thing and and a good public transport so make life easy.

✓ I prefer urban areas because there are many facilities and entertainment. I can easily go to the cinema, find restaurants and many other things, and there is good public transport, which makes life easier.

Missing articles and prepositions: use 'go to the cinema', 'find restaurants', 'many other things'. Insert 'the' before 'cinema' and pluralize 'restaurant' and 'things'. Use 'good public transport' with 'there is' and a relative clause 'which makes life easier' for clarity. Remove repetition and fix word order. Suggestion: Break into shorter sentences, add 'the' and plural forms, and use 'which makes life easier.'

× So I really like I prefer to urban area.

✓ So I really prefer urban areas.

Incorrect structure 'I prefer to urban area' — 'prefer' does not require 'to' before the object; use plural 'areas' to match earlier statement. Remove redundant 'I like'. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer urban areas.'

× I prefer the views in other countries because they offer culture and freedom in which I experience at home.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because they offer cultures and freedoms that I do not experience at home.

'Culture and freedom in which I experience at home' is incorrect. Use plural 'cultures'/'freedoms' if referring to multiple countries, and use 'that I do not experience at home' to clarify contrast. 'In which' is unnatural here. Suggestion: Use 'that I do not experience at home' and consider plural nouns.

× For example, I visit to China, Sweden to see their landscape and daily life and see daily life in their cities.

✓ For example, I visited China and Sweden to see their landscapes and daily life in their cities.

Use past tense 'visited' for completed trips. Remove incorrect preposition 'to' after 'visit' and connect countries with 'and'. Pluralize 'landscape' to 'landscapes' and streamline 'daily life in their cities.' Suggestion: Use 'visited China and Sweden' and past tense consistently.