Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, and add a brief specific detail about what you enjoy photographing. Use linking words (for example, so, because) to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes, especially when I travel. For example, when I travel by car or bus I often see beautiful sunsets, so I take out my phone to capture the colors and the peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Clarify your main point and fix unclear phrases. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and vague phrases such as 'it's fast in the big.'

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more open than cities. For instance, I can walk or run freely in the countryside and enjoy nature, which gives me a strong sense of peace.

Suggestion: Correct grammatical errors and be specific. Start with a clear topic sentence expressing your preference, then give reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., 'I have never been abroad').

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I have never been abroad and I want to experience different landscapes. For example, I would love to visit Japan to see its mountains and gardens and to learn more about its unique culture.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different fields, especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.

The student used 'fields' which likely is a word-choice error rather than grammatical; however 'views' matches the examiner's question. This is not a grammatical form from the list, but to keep meaning consistent, replace 'fields' with 'views'. Improve by matching nouns to context and checking collocation: 'taking pictures of views' is natural. Note: If 'fields' was intended, no grammatical correction needed.

× Travel by car or bus, for example, you can see a beautiful sunset.

✓ When you travel by car or bus, for example, you can see a beautiful sunset.

The original sentence fragments lack a clear subject and appropriate connective. Begin with a subordinating conjunction 'When' to connect the adverbial clause to the main clause. This fixes the sentence structure by providing a clear time clause followed by the main clause. Suggestion: always include a subject and verb for each clause and use conjunctions to join ideas.

× I will take up my phone to capture this beautiful moment.

✓ I take out my phone to capture this beautiful moment.

The use of 'will' makes the action sound like a future intention, but the speaker describes a habitual or immediate action when seeing a sunset. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I take out my phone') or present continuous for immediate actions ('I'm taking out my phone'). Also, 'take up my phone' is unnatural; use 'take out' or 'put up'. Suggestion: choose tense to match meaning (habit vs immediate) and use common verb phrases for objects.

× I prefer views in rural areas because it's fast in the big, which can let me run and work whatever I like.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because it's quiet and spacious, which lets me relax and do whatever I like.

Several issues: 'it's fast in the big' is ungrammatical and unclear. Pronoun 'it' was used but the referent is unclear. Also verb forms need agreement: use 'lets' (third person singular) not 'let'. The sentence also used inappropriate verbs ('run and work') for the intended idea. Revision uses clearer adjectives ('quiet and spacious'), corrects subject-verb agreement ('lets'), and uses appropriate verbs ('relax and do'). Suggestion: ensure pronouns have clear antecedents, check subject-verb agreement, and choose verbs that fit the intended meaning.

× Uh, what's more, it gave me a sense of peace.

✓ What's more, it gives me a sense of peace.

The speaker is describing a general or habitual reaction to rural views, so present simple ('gives') is appropriate rather than past simple ('gave'). Use present tense for general truths or habitual responses. Also remove filler 'Uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: choose tense (present vs past) according to whether the feeling is general/habitual or a single past event.

× I prefer refuse in other country because I never I have never been abroad before so I want to see different sceneries, especially Japan because I like its culture.

✓ I prefer to travel to other countries because I have never been abroad, so I want to see different scenery, especially Japan because I like its culture.

Multiple problems: 'prefer refuse' is incorrect word choice; likely 'prefer to travel'. 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country', and 'I never I have never' duplicates auxiliary; correct is 'I have never been abroad'. 'sceneries' is incorrect plural; use 'scenery' (uncountable). Also ensure tense: present perfect 'have never been' is correct for life experience. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations ('prefer to travel'), correct number (countries vs country), avoid duplicated words, and use uncountable noun 'scenery'.