Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha net ve doğal olmalı. Kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, neden sevdiğinizi açıkça belirtin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, um) kullanmayın. Ayrıca zaman kiplerini tutarlı kullanın (ör. present simple veya future). Destekleyici detay olarak hangi tür manzaraları veya nesneleri çektiğinizi ve neden hoşlandığınızı verin; örneğin renkler, şekiller veya duygular hakkında kısa bir açıklama ekleyin.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing flowers because their colors and shapes are very vivid and interesting. In the future I plan to buy a better camera to capture finer details and play with lighting. Photography helps me relax and notice small details in nature.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı biraz genişleterek daha spesifik olun; neden kırsal alanları tercih ettiğinizi iki kısa destekleyici sebep verin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı sağlayın (for example, because, so). Kelime seçimini geliştirin: 'ground' yerine 'landscape' veya 'countryside', 'some kind of plant' yerine 'trees or wildflowers' gibi ifadeler kullanın.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and fresh air. For example, I like scenes with rolling hills and wildflowers, which feel more relaxing than busy city streets. Also, rural views allow me to take clearer nature photos without much distraction.

Suggestion: Cevap daha mantıklı ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru cümlelerle ifade edilmeli. 'Perform' ve 'will' yanlış kullanılmış; doğru kelimeler 'prefer' ve 'landscapes' olabilir. Bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın ve ardından iki kısa neden verin (örneğin kültür veya aileye yakınlık, tanıdık manzaralar). Gereksiz tekrar ve kısa, tamamlanmamış cümlelerden kaçının.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are unique and familiar to me. For instance, my town has historic streets and special local scenery that I really enjoy. I also like staying close to home since I can visit these places often and feel connected to them.

× I think I like it taking a picture with the print color and the print, uh, shape of, uh, flower, uh, in the future maybe I bought camera and I taking a picture with the camera.

✓ I think I like taking pictures of the printed colors and shapes of flowers. In the future maybe I will buy a camera and take pictures with it.

The student incorrectly uses 'like it taking' and 'I taking' where the gerund or base form is required. Use 'like taking' (verb + -ing after like) and 'will buy' for future intention; after 'will buy a camera' use base verb 'take' not 'taking'. Suggestions: Use 'like taking pictures', use plural 'pictures' for general habit, and use 'will buy' + base verb for future actions. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer rural areas. I like more natural area with ground and some kind of plant.

✓ I prefer rural areas. I like more natural areas with soil and various kinds of plants.

The student uses singular 'area' and 'ground' incorrectly. Use plural 'areas' to match 'rural areas', and 'soil' is a more natural noun than 'ground' in this context. Also 'some kind of plant' should be 'various kinds of plants' to indicate variety. Suggestions: Keep number agreement between nouns and use appropriate nouns for natural features. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I also perform my country. We have a very interesting and unique will. Also, I don't chase another country. I like it. My town also.

✓ I also prefer my country. We have a very interesting and unique culture. Also, I don't want to go to other countries; I like my town.

The original contains multiple wrong words and sentence fragments: 'perform' should be 'prefer'; 'will' is likely a mistake for 'culture'; 'don't chase another country' is incorrect phrasing for 'don't want to go to other countries'; fragments 'I like it. My town also.' are awkward. Suggestions: Use 'prefer' for preference, use a concrete noun like 'culture', and combine short fragments into clear sentences (e.g., 'I don't want to go to other countries; I like my town'). Grammar problem type ID: 27