Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect collocations (e.g., “deep memories,” “helps me to over”). Use past or present perfect correctly when talking about memories.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I visit a beautiful landscape I take photos so I can look back later and recall how I felt. This also helps me feel nostalgic in a positive way.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference and support it with specific examples and linking words. Correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors (e.g., unclear words like “Lockport,” “tik wrappers”) and avoid contradictory wording without explanation.

Example: I usually prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and well-known monuments. For example, I like walking among tall buildings and visiting city squares where there are sculptures and cafes. However, I also appreciate rural views for their peacefulness, so it depends on my mood.

Suggestion: Give a concise, direct answer (prefer/depends) and support it with a specific reason and an example. Use correct grammar for phrases like “it depends,” and avoid repeating the word “views” awkwardly. Use linking words like “because” or “on the other hand.”

Example: I don't have a strong preference for views from my own country or other countries because it depends on the place. For instance, I enjoy historic landscapes at home because they are familiar, but I also love foreign coastal scenery when I travel because it feels new and exciting.

× Yes, definitely taking pictures is something interesting because it helps to deep memories and later on we can remind them.

✓ Yes, definitely taking pictures is interesting because they help preserve memories and later we can recall them.

The original sentence misuses 'helps to deep memories' and 'remind them'. 'Deep' is incorrect; use 'preserve' or 'keep' with 'memories'. Also subject 'taking pictures' is singular gerund but referring to 'pictures' (plural) fits better with 'they help'. Use 'recall' rather than 'remind' when the subject remembers memories. Improve clarity and correct verb forms and collocations.

× So if I have nostalgia so I would like to see the pictures which really helps me to over.

✓ If I feel nostalgic, I like to look at pictures because they really help me get over it.

The sentence has redundancy ('So if' and 'so') and incorrect phrase 'have nostalgia'. Use 'feel nostalgic'. 'Helps me to over' is ungrammatical; use 'help me get over it' or 'help me cope'. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'pictures' requires 'help' not 'helps'. Remove redundant words and fix verb phrase.

× Lockport Sometimes I prefer using city areas, for example tik wrappers, big buildings, monuments.

✓ Sometimes I prefer urban areas, for example city streets, tall buildings, and monuments.

The original has misplaced 'Lockport' and incorrect phrase 'using city areas' and 'tik wrappers' (unclear). Use 'urban areas' or 'city streets' and list examples with parallel nouns. Remove stray words and correct word choice.

× Good architecture can be attractive on the other hand in urban areas.

✓ Good architecture can be attractive; on the other hand, rural areas can also be appealing.

The original lacks contrast clarity and punctuation. 'On the other hand' should introduce the contrasting idea and be followed by a comma. Also clarify that rural areas are the contrasting option. Adjust adjective use ('attractive' and 'appealing') for parallel structure.

× I love views but not on the pieces of which country I like most.

✓ I love views regardless of which country they are in.

The phrase 'not on the pieces of which country I like most' is ungrammatical and misuses pronouns and noun phrases. Use 'regardless of which country they are in' to express that the speaker cares about the view, not the country. This corrects pronoun reference and simplifies the sentence.

× It's totally depend upon the view.

✓ It totally depends on the view.

Use the correct verb form 'depends' for the third-person singular subject 'It'. Also use the preposition 'on' rather than 'upon' for natural modern usage (both are acceptable but 'depends on' is more common). This fixes subject-verb agreement and a preposition choice.

× How attractive is that?

✓ How attractive it is.

As a standalone question 'How attractive is that?' is grammatically correct, but in context it should be a clause: 'It depends on how attractive it is.' I provide the corrected clause to fit the surrounding sentence. Adjust sentence structure to fit context.

× Sometimes it views watching views at my country and the other hand other countries views are also attractive.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy looking at views in my country, and on the other hand, views in other countries are also attractive.

The original misuses 'it views watching views' and lacks subject clarity. Use 'I enjoy looking at views' or 'I like watching views' with correct subject and verb forms. Add commas for contrast and possessive or plural noun forms 'views in other countries'. This corrects verb form and improves clarity.