Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has some grammar and vocabulary issues and is slightly repetitive. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, correcting verb forms and word choice, and adding one specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example, change “memory” to “remember,” use past participles correctly, and avoid repeating “take pictures.”

Example: Yes. I enjoy photographing different views when I travel because it helps me remember landscapes and the people I meet. For example, last year I photographed a coastal village and kept the photos to remind me of the scenery and local friends.

Suggestion: Good content and a clear reason, but refine grammar and word choice, and tighten the structure. Use a clear topic sentence, link your ideas with a connector like “because” or “so,” and be more specific about examples. Replace “watch different views” with “see” or “enjoy” and correct singular/plural forms.

Example: I prefer rural views because I work and live in the city, so in my free time I like to enjoy mountains and the ocean to relax. For instance, hiking in the mountains helps me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: The idea is understandable, but the answer is ungrammatical and repetitive. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, correct tense and prepositions, and give one specific example to support your preference. Avoid fillers like “like” and “so.”

Example: I prefer views in other countries because after living in my country for nearly 30 years, I want to see different landscapes and cultures. For example, I enjoyed the unique flora and coastal scenery when I visited Japan last year.

× I like taking pictures of different views because when I travel I like to take pictures so that I can memory the views and the people I met when I was in the journey.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because when I travel I like to take pictures so that I can remember the views and the people I met during the journey.

The verb 'memory' is a noun, not a verb. Use the verb 'remember' (base form) to express recalling something. Also use 'during the journey' for natural preposition use. Suggestion: replace incorrect noun with correct verb and use 'during' when referring to a period of travel. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× Actually I like views in rural area because I work and right now live in the city, so in my leisure time I like to watch different views like mountains or oceans which can calm my mind.

✓ Actually I like views in rural areas because I work and currently live in the city, so in my leisure time I like to look at natural scenery like mountains or oceans, which can calm my mind.

Use plural 'rural areas' to refer generally to non-city regions. 'Watch different views' is unnatural; use 'look at' or 'see' and 'natural scenery' fits better. 'Right now' is conversational; 'currently' is more appropriate in this context. Also add comma before 'which'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× I prefer views in other countries because I live in my own country for like almost 30 years and different country has different like people or things to enjoy and like different natural plants so.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in my own country for almost 30 years, and different countries have different people, things to enjoy, and different native plants.

Use present perfect 'have lived' to express duration up to now. Use plural 'countries' to match 'other countries'. 'For like almost 30 years' -> 'for almost 30 years' (remove filler 'like'). 'Different country has' should be 'different countries have' (subject-verb agreement). 'Natural plants' -> 'native plants' or 'different plants' for clarity. Also remove trailing 'so'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)