Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer direct and concise. Fix grammar (remove duplicate words, correct prepositions and verb forms) and add one brief supporting reason using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds.

Example: To be honest, I don't really like taking pictures because I prefer to enjoy the views rather than spend time taking photos. For example, when I'm at a scenic spot I focus on the atmosphere and sounds, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles, collocations), remove hesitations, and give one specific reason using a linking word. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I definitely prefer rural views because I spend most of my time in cities and want a break from the crowded conditions. For example, on vacations I enjoy open fields and quiet lakes that feel more peaceful than urban streets.

Suggestion: Give a clear, direct answer and correct vocabulary/grammar errors. Replace unclear phrases ("pray for a few is") and use linking words to list specific features. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country, Indonesia, because it offers unique scenery not easily found elsewhere. For example, Indonesia has diverse landscapes—lush forests, volcanic mountains, and beautiful beaches—that I find more special than many other countries.

× To be honest, I don't really like taking pictures anywhere because I I prefer to enjoy about the views more than spend time to taking some photos.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like taking pictures anywhere because I prefer to enjoy the views more than spend time taking photos.

Errors: unnecessary 'about' after enjoy, extra 'to' before 'taking', repeated 'I', and awkward phrase 'spend time to taking'. Use 'enjoy the views' (verb 'enjoy' takes a direct object, no preposition), 'spend time taking photos' (spend time + gerund), remove duplicate 'I'. Suggested improvement: practice verbs that require objects versus prepositions and the correct pattern 'spend time + gerund'. ID:8

× I think I spend most of my times in urban areas, so I feel a bit borrowed the condition in there.

✓ I think I spend most of my time in urban areas, so I feel a bit bored by the conditions there.

Errors: 'most of my times' should be 'most of my time' (uncountable time), 'borrowed' is wrong word; intended 'bored', and preposition/structure 'bored by the conditions there' is correct. Also remove 'in' before 'there'. Suggested improvement: learn countable vs uncountable nouns and common adjective + preposition collocations like 'bored by'. ID:14

× I used to go on vacation to uh, to rural areas and I think it has more beautiful views than the urban.

✓ I used to go on vacation to rural areas and I think they have more beautiful views than urban areas.

Errors: 'it has' refers to singular but 'rural areas' is plural — use 'they have' or rephrase. 'the urban' is incomplete; use 'urban areas' or 'the urban areas'. Also remove duplicate 'to'. Suggested improvement: ensure subject number (singular/plural) matches verb and use complete noun phrases like 'urban areas'. ID:1

× I can confidently say that I pray for a few is in my own country, Indonesia, because Indonesia really beautiful has, uh, their unique views, uh, from forest, beach, sea and Indonesia has anything that other country doesn't have.

✓ I can confidently say that a few of my favorite places are in my own country, Indonesia, because Indonesia is really beautiful and has unique landscapes, such as forests, beaches, and seas, and Indonesia has things that other countries don't have.

Multiple errors: 'pray for a few is' is unintelligible; intended 'a few of my favorite places are' (subject-verb agreement and correct noun phrase). Missing verb 'is' after 'Indonesia' — use 'Indonesia is really beautiful'. 'their unique views' should be 'unique landscapes' or 'unique views' and must agree with Indonesia as singular. 'from forest, beach, sea' should be pluralized and listed properly. Also 'other country doesn't have' should be 'other countries don't have' for plural. Suggested improvement: plan sentence before speaking, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct noun phrases and parallel lists. ID:6