Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and accurate with tenses, reduce hesitations, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting details using linking words. Use present simple for habits (e.g., "I enjoy"), and avoid repeating phrases like "different views."

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I usually shoot in landscape mode so I can capture the whole scene, and when I eat out I photograph food to share with my friends on social media.

Suggestion: Clarify ideas and correct grammar and pronunciation. Use linking words like "but" and "however" properly, and avoid fragmented phrases. Keep to two or three sentences: state preference and give a brief reason with one specific example.

Example: I like both, but if I'm feeling lonely I prefer the city because I can visit cafés and restaurants to meet people. However, when I want peace and nature, I choose the countryside for its calm landscapes and fresh air.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct vocabulary and tense use. Avoid vague words like "reason" (use "regions") and duplicate words. Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (e.g., places you want to visit) with appropriate linking words.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't explored all its regions yet. For instance, I want to visit the northern mountains and the coastal areas to see different landscapes and enjoy local nature.

× When I travel, I took pictures in landscape mode so that I can see the full scenario of that place.

✓ When I travel, I take pictures in landscape mode so that I can see the full view of a place.

The original mixes past tense 'took' with present habitual 'When I travel' and present modal 'can'. Use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Also 'scenario' is odd; 'view' or 'scene' is more natural. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habits and choose correct vocabulary.

× And also when I go to restaurant, I took uh, the picture of food so that I can share with my friends on Facebook.

✓ Also, when I go to a restaurant, I take pictures of food so that I can share them with my friends on Facebook.

Again, 'took' (past) conflicts with 'when I go' (present habitual). Use simple present 'take' for regular habits. Also add the article 'a' before 'restaurant' and plural 'pictures' or remove 'the'. Replace vague 'the picture' with 'pictures' and refer back with 'them'.

× And also when I go to restaurant, I took uh, the picture of food so that I can share with my friends on Facebook.

✓ Also, when I go to a restaurant, I take pictures of food so that I can share them with my friends on Facebook.

Missing article 'a' before 'restaurant' makes the sentence ungrammatical in English. Use 'a restaurant' for singular, countable nouns when not specific.

× When I travel, I took pictures in landscape mode so that I can see the full scenario of that place.

✓ When I travel, I take pictures in landscape mode so that I can see the full view of a place.

The phrase 'landscape mode' is fine but maintain consistent tense. 'Full scenario' is unnatural; use 'full view' or 'the whole scene'.

× I prefer both but when I feel lonely, I prefer the city because I can go to restaurant or cafes to meet people and refresh my mind.

✓ I prefer both, but when I feel lonely, I prefer the city because I can go to restaurants or cafes to meet people and refresh my mind.

Use plural 'restaurants' to match 'cafes' when speaking generally. Also add a comma after 'both' for clarity. The verbs are present and correct; fix noun number and article usage.

× However, when I want to enjoy natural scenario, I am to relax qui quietly.

✓ However, when I want to enjoy the natural scenery, I am able to relax quietly.

Replace 'natural scenario' with 'the natural scenery' (correct noun and article). 'I am to relax' is incorrect in this context; use 'I am able to relax' or 'I can relax'. Remove duplicated fragment 'qui' and correct adverb placement of 'quietly' after verb.

× However, when I want to enjoy natural scenario, I am to relax qui quietly.

✓ However, when I want to enjoy the natural scenery, I am able to relax quietly.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'natural scenery' when referring to a general concept. Also 'scenery' is the correct noun rather than 'scenario'.

× I prefer the countryside for its peaceful landscapes.

✓ I prefer the countryside for its peaceful landscape.

'Countryside' often pairs with the uncountable 'landscape' when speaking generally; however, 'peaceful landscapes' is also acceptable. Either use singular 'landscape' for the general quality or keep plural if referring to multiple scenes. Suggestion: use 'peaceful landscape' for smoother phrasing.

× I prefer views in my own country because I have not seen all its reason yet.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I have not seen all its regions yet.

The word 'reason' is incorrect; likely intended 'regions' or 'areas'. Keep present perfect 'have not seen' since it connects past experience to now. Use 'regions' for geographical parts.

× I don't have enough time at this moment to travel around but I hope to visit all around the countryside and explore more places and and enjoy its nature in future.

✓ I don't have enough time at the moment to travel around, but I hope to visit the countryside, explore more places, and enjoy its nature in the future.

Remove duplicate 'and and'. Use 'at the moment' (more natural). Insert commas and articles: 'the countryside' and 'in the future'. Parallel structure: use three verbs in same form 'visit, explore, and enjoy'.