Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is natural and relevant, but slightly long-winded and could be clearer with a stronger topic sentence and one concrete supporting detail. Reduce filler words and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a linking phrase to connect the main statement and the reason.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because changing the angle often reveals unexpected details. For example, shooting a building from ground level can highlight architectural lines that are invisible from eye level.

Suggestion: Your response tries to compare both but contains vocabulary errors and hesitations that reduce clarity. Use correct words (e.g., 'places' or 'areas' instead of 'wheels'), avoid filler sounds, and give one clear reason for each preference using linking words such as 'because' and 'whereas'. Keep it within two or three sentences.

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different kinds of beauty: urban areas show interesting man-made structures and vibrant street life, whereas rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and natural colors.

Suggestion: Your answer communicates the idea but contains repeated word choice errors and awkward phrasing. Replace incorrect words ('wheels') with 'views' or 'places', use plural/singular agreement, and give one concise reason with a brief example. Avoid repetition and keep sentences well-structured.

Example: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy beautiful views both at home and abroad because each place has unique features. For instance, my country has diverse landscapes, while other countries may offer architectural styles or cultural scenery I haven't seen before.

× I do love taking pictures from different angles as when you look at things from different perspectives you can always get some surprise.

✓ I do love taking pictures from different angles because when you look at things from different perspectives you can always get some surprises.

The original sentence uses 'as' in a causal sense which is acceptable but can be ambiguous; more importantly 'some surprise' is uncountable or should be plural 'some surprises' to match the idea of multiple unexpected things. Change 'as' to 'because' for clarity and make 'surprise' plural. Suggestion: use 'because' for clear causal relationships and use plural for countable nouns when referring to multiple occurrences.

× I think both wheels in urban areas and rural areas have their own forms of beauties.

✓ I think both urban and rural areas have their own kinds of beauty.

The phrase 'both wheels' is incorrect — likely a wrong word choice. 'Forms of beauties' is unnatural; 'kinds of beauty' or simply 'their own beauty' is idiomatic. Use 'urban and rural areas' rather than 'wheels in urban areas and rural areas'. Suggestion: choose the correct noun (area) and use uncountable 'beauty' or 'kinds of beauty' instead of 'beauties'.

× The beauty of urban area is a combination of nature and human, umm, creation, well, the nature.

✓ The beauty of an urban area is a combination of nature and human creation.

Missing article before 'urban area' — should be 'an urban area' (Article errors, but corrected here with adjective use). Also 'human, umm, creation, well, the nature' is disfluent and repetitive; 'human creation' is the correct collocation and 'nature' does not need 'the' here. Suggestion: remove filler words and use 'an urban area' and 'human creation'.

× I prefer beautiful wheels no matter in my country or other countries as there are beautiful views.

✓ I prefer beautiful places whether in my country or in other countries because there are beautiful views everywhere.

Again 'wheels' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'places' or 'areas'. 'No matter in my country or other countries' is unidiomatic; use 'whether...in my country or in other countries' and add 'everywhere' for clarity. Suggestion: replace wrong noun with 'places' and use 'whether...or' for alternatives.

× My country's wheels has diversities as well and I believe other countries have their own features and varies.

✓ My country's places have diversity as well, and I believe other countries have their own features and variations.

Several errors: 'wheels' again wrong noun. Subject-verb agreement: 'My country's ... has' should be 'have' if plural noun used; 'diversities' is awkward — use 'diversity' (uncountable) or 'varieties'. 'Varies' is a verb, but the sentence needs a noun 'variations'. Suggestion: use 'places' with plural verb 'have', use 'diversity' or 'variety', and use 'variations' instead of 'varies'.