Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and complete your thought with a specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so, therefore). Aim for 2–4 clear sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photos help me preserve special moments. For example, I often photograph family gatherings and scenes from my childhood neighborhood, so I can look back on those memories later.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and an example. Replace informal phrases (e.g., "click too much") with natural vocabulary (e.g., "take many photos"). Use a linking word to explain cause and effect (because, so). Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer photographing urban areas because the city scenery and architecture relax me and inspire creativity. For example, I often capture street scenes and building details at sunset, so I can study light and composition in my photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly and grammatically: state your preference, give a reason, and support it with a specific example. Avoid tense and word order errors; use linking words (because, since, so) to make the answer coherent. Keep sentences concise and complete.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I have many fond memories of local parks and landscapes. Since childhood I have photographed nearby parks and rivers whenever I saw something beautiful, so those scenes feel more meaningful to me.

× Of course I do capturing moment is my favorite thing ever.

✓ Of course I do; capturing moments is my favorite thing ever.

The phrase lacks proper structure: after 'do' as a pro-verb you need a clause or use the gerund phrase as the subject. Use a semicolon or conjunction to separate 'I do' from the gerund clause. Also use the plural 'moments' for general meaning. Suggestion: say 'Of course I do; capturing moments is my favorite thing.'

× Uh, I taking moment, not views because the moment I stay forever in our photographs album, uh, for example, in my childhood, I.

✓ Uh, I take photos of moments, not views, because the moments stay forever in our photo albums; for example, when I was a child, I often...

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms: 'I taking' should be 'I take' (simple present for habitual action). 'The moment I stay' is wrong; use 'moments stay' (present simple) or describe past with 'when I was a child'. Also 'photographs album' should be 'photo albums' (noun form and plural). Suggestion: form complete clauses and match tense: 'I take photos of moments... they stay forever in our photo albums. For example, when I was a child, I...'.

× Mostly I prefer urban areas to taking photographs because it's make me so calm and relaxed.

✓ Mostly I prefer urban areas for taking photographs because they make me feel calm and relaxed.

Use 'prefer ... for ...' to indicate purpose; 'to taking' is incorrect. 'It's make me' mixes singular contraction with plural verb; change to 'they make me feel' or 'they make me' and include 'feel' for emotion. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they make'.

× That's why I do click too much photographs in urban areas.

✓ That's why I take so many photographs in urban areas.

'Do click' is an informal and awkward combination; use 'take' or 'click' alone. 'Too much photographs' is incorrect quantifier and form; use 'so many photographs' for countable nouns. Suggestion: 'I take so many photographs' or 'I click a lot of photos.'

× That's it.

✓ That's all.

'That's it' is not incorrect grammatically but is abrupt; 'That's all' is more natural to end an answer. If keeping exact meaning, no grammar change required; suggestion improves fluency.

× Personally, I didn't visit any other countries rather than my own country, so I prefer my own country and in my childhood to still now are taking photograph nearby my parks and natural views.

✓ Personally, I have not visited any other countries besides my own, so I prefer my own country. From my childhood until now, I have been taking photographs near parks and natural sites.

Use present perfect 'have not visited' for life experience up to now, not simple past 'didn't visit'. 'Rather than' should be 'besides' or 'other than'. The clause about childhood to now needs present perfect continuous 'have been taking' to show an action continuing from past to present. 'Nearby my parks' is incorrect preposition and possessive: use 'near parks' or 'near my local parks'. Also 'natural views' is better as 'natural sites' or 'scenery'.

× Whatever I saw something very beautiful.

✓ Whenever I saw something very beautiful, I would take a picture.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Whatever I saw something' mixes relative pronoun with a clause. Use 'Whenever' to mean 'whenever I saw' and complete the thought by stating the result or action (e.g., 'I would take a picture'). This fixes sentence structure and clarity.