Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, avoid repetition, correct grammar and choose appropriate vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you travel, what types of scenes you prefer) using linking words. Also correct unnatural phrases (e.g., “God's nature” → “nature” or “God’s creation”; “I have to do it as a patient” is unclear).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love nature and travel. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain landscapes when I visit new places, and I post these images on my social media to engage my followers.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “no such kind of views” and incorrect grammar. Explain what you like about urban views (architecture, lights, variety) and contrast briefly with rural views.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and city lights. For instance, tall buildings, parks and street scenes offer interesting compositions, whereas rural views are often more limited to fields and simple landscapes.

Suggestion: Complete your answer with a clear reason and specific details. Start with a direct statement of preference, then explain what ‘a lot of’ means—more diversity, different cultures, or unique landmarks—and give an example. Avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer greater diversity in landscapes and architecture. For example, I enjoy photographing ancient temples in Southeast Asia and modern skylines in Europe, which are quite different from the scenery at home.

× I love the God's nature because I am a social media influencer and I I have to do it.

✓ I love God's nature because I am a social media influencer and I have to do it.

The phrase 'the God's nature' incorrectly uses the definite article before a possessive; use 'God's nature'. Also there is a duplicated 'I I'. Remove the extra pronoun. Suggestion: use possessive form without 'the' and proofread to remove repeated words.

× I do have to do it as a work.

✓ I do have to do it as work.

The phrase 'as a work' is ungrammatical because 'work' in this sense is uncountable and does not take the article 'a'. Use 'as work' or 'as my job'. Suggestion: use 'as work' or 'as my job' depending on meaning.

× I have to do it as a patient.

✓ I have to do it as part of my job.

'As a patient' does not fit the intended meaning; the speaker likely means it's part of their work. Replace with 'as part of my job' or 'as my job' to express purpose. Suggestion: choose a phrase that accurately expresses obligation in relation to work.

× I love taking pictures of different views because I love nature.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views because I love nature.

This sentence is grammatically correct regarding singular/plural; no change needed. Kept here to indicate no error of this type.

× I prefer views in urban areas as compared to rural areas because I used to live in a rural area where there's no such kind of views like there is an urban areas and that is it.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas compared to rural areas because I used to live in a rural area where there aren't such views like there are in urban areas.

Errors: 'there's' (there is) is singular and does not agree with plural 'views'; use 'there aren't'. 'No such kind of views' is awkward — use 'such views' or 'those kinds of views'. 'Like there is an urban areas' is ungrammatical; use 'like there are in urban areas.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns and simplify phrases ('such views', 'in urban areas').

× I prefer views in other countries because as compared to my country there is a lot of.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because, compared to my country, there is a lot more variety.

The original ends abruptly and misuses 'as compared to' placement. Use 'compared to my country' or 'as compared with my country'. Also 'there is a lot of' needs an object; 'a lot more variety' completes the idea. Suggestion: complete comparative statements and place comparative phrase next to what it modifies.

× I I have to do it.

✓ I have to do it.

The repeated 'I' is a typing error causing redundancy. Remove duplicate pronoun. Suggestion: proofread to eliminate accidental repetition.