Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and repetition, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific details connected with linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I have loved photographing nature since childhood, so I often take photos when I visit new places. For example, last year I captured sunrise photos at a nearby national park, which taught me a lot about lighting and composition.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement, avoid grammar mistakes (articles, plurals), and connect ideas with linking words. Provide a specific reason and one brief example to support your preference.

Example: I prefer rural areas to urban ones. Rural places have more natural beauty and wildlife, so I enjoy photographing birds and trees there. For instance, last spring I spent a weekend in the countryside and took many photos of blooming fields and local bird species.

Suggestion: Avoid vague or negative generalizations; give a clear opinion sentence and support it with specific reasons and a comparison. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "developed" and "well-managed") and correct article usage.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because some places abroad are better preserved and greener than the area where I live. For example, when I visited a European city last year, the parks were well maintained and full of trees, which made the scenery much more attractive than what I usually see at home.

× Yes, I really like this uh, because I, I love umm, taking picture of nature from my childhood and umm, sometimes I do it now when uh, I go to, I go to visit in a new place, which was, which is very.

✓ Yes, I really like it because I have loved taking pictures of nature since my childhood, and sometimes I still do it when I visit a new place that is very beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (Grammar problem type ID 1: Singular and plural issue). 'From my childhood' is unnatural; use 'since my childhood' to indicate a starting point and continuous action (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'I have loved' (present perfect) is appropriate to show a past-to-present habit. Remove filler repetitions like 'I, I' and 'umm'. 'Which was, which is very' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'that is very beautiful' to describe the new place. Suggestions: use plural nouns where appropriate, use present perfect with 'since' for actions continuing to present, and simplify filler words.

× I truly prefer a rural areas cause urban areas are full of buildings then factories, builds offices.

✓ I truly prefer rural areas because urban areas are full of buildings, factories, and office buildings.

Singular/plural error: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' to make 'rural areas' (Grammar problem type ID 1). 'then' is incorrect here; use 'and' or commas to list items. 'Builds offices' is wrong word choice; use 'office buildings' or 'offices'. Suggestion: remove incorrect articles before plural nouns and use correct conjunctions or punctuation for lists.

× But in the rural area is it? It is. It's full of natural beauty and there is so many birds, trees.

✓ But in rural areas it is. They're full of natural beauty and there are so many birds and trees.

Preposition/article issues: 'in the rural area' sounds like a specific place; use 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside' for general preference (Grammar problem type ID 17 also relates to article use but primary here is preposition/article; choose 11). Also subject-verb agreement/plural: 'there is so many birds' should be 'there are so many birds' because 'birds' is plural (Grammar problem type ID 27). List items need 'and' between them. Suggestion: use plural forms consistently and match 'there is/are' to the subject number.

× I prefer another country's views cause in the in this time my country is not well developed but but on the other hand another country has the has the fresh and green view because they are very well banded.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because at the moment my country is not well developed, but other countries have fresh, green scenery because they are very well developed.

Quantifier/word choice and article errors: 'another country's views' is awkward; use 'views in other countries'. 'In the in this time' should be 'at the moment' for current time (Grammar problem type ID 7: Future tense not involved; main issue is word choice/phrasing, classified here as 14). 'has the has the' is repetition and incorrect. 'fresh and green view' should be 'fresh, green scenery' or 'green views'. 'They are very well banded' likely intended 'developed' or 'well managed'; 'banded' is incorrect word choice (Grammar problem type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: use clear time expressions, avoid repetition, choose correct adjectives (developed), and use plural/general forms for other countries.