Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, use correct noun forms and sentence structures, respond directly with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce repetition and avoid unclear words (e.g. 'wheels', 'routes').

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes. For example, mountain shots often show dense forests and wildlife, which help me remember peaceful hikes, and city photos capture lively streets and architecture that remind me of urban life.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons and one brief example. Use correct verbs and articles, and avoid mixing tenses. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer rural views because I love mountains and the sea. For example, I often hike to nearby mountains to take photos and have picnics, since seeing trees and wildlife in person feels special and relaxing.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (own country) and then support it with clear, relevant reasons and a coherent example. Fix vocabulary and place names, use correct collocations (e.g. 'Taiwan has many mountains'), and keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and I can easily visit mountains nearby. For example, I often invite friends and family to hike a local mountain together; we bring food, share stories, and enjoy the scenery.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different routes because I think each wheels have its special features.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different routes because I think each wheel has its special features.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'taking' (general activity). 'Wheels' and 'each' conflict: 'each' requires a singular noun, so use 'wheel'. Also the verb should agree with singular subject 'each wheel', so 'have' becomes 'has'. Suggestion: Use 'each' with a singular noun and singular verb, and pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures' for the activity.

× Like in the mountain you have more trees and more and more animals and the picture you can help me to recall this memory.

✓ For example, in the mountains you have many trees and more and more animals, and the pictures help me recall those memories.

'In the mountain' should be 'in the mountains' (natural plural). 'More and more animals' is acceptable but 'many trees' is more natural. 'The picture you can help me to recall this memory' is ungrammatical: 'pictures help me recall those memories' uses correct subject-verb agreement and pronouns. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and match verbs to plural subjects; avoid awkward word order.

× I prefer wheels in rural areas because I very like mountains and sea, so I usually will go to the mountain and capture some photos in there and sometimes I will having some picnic in there because when I look trees and wear animals in real may feel very rare.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I really like mountains and the sea, so I usually go to the mountains and take some photos there, and sometimes I have a picnic there because seeing trees and wild animals in real life feels very rare.

Many issues: 'wheels' is incorrect; context requires 'views'. 'Very like' should be 'really like' (adverb placement). 'Mountains and sea' needs article 'the sea'. 'Will go' unnecessary for habitual action—use simple present 'go'. 'Capture some photos' more natural as 'take some photos'. 'In there' should be 'there'. 'Will having' is incorrect verb form; use 'have' or 'have a picnic'. 'When I look trees and wear animals in real' is incorrect: 'see trees and wild animals in real life' is correct. Verb 'may feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular 'seeing ... feels'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions, correct noun choices, and proper adverb placement.

× I prefer wheels in my countries because it's more familiar and Taiwanese are more mountains.

✓ I generally prefer views in my country because it is more familiar and Taiwan has more mountains.

'Wheels' is wrong; should be 'views'. 'My countries' conflicts with 'it is'—use 'my country'. 'Taiwanese are more mountains' is ungrammatical: intended meaning is 'Taiwan has more mountains' (country has mountains). Suggestion: Use correct nouns for 'views' and match subject-verb structure when describing a country.

× For example, I usually invite my friends and my family go to Crimea, cry the mountain with me, and I will do it will bring some food, because we can not only can share our story together, but also can look the mountain.

✓ For example, I usually invite my friends and family to go to the mountains with me, and I bring some food, because we can not only share stories together but also enjoy the mountains.

Many structure errors: 'invite my friends and my family go' needs 'invite ... to go'. 'Crimea, cry the mountain' is likely mistranscription; corrected to 'the mountains'. 'I will do it will bring some food' is ungrammatical—use 'I bring some food'. 'We can not only can share' has redundant 'can' and wrong verb forms; use 'we can not only share ... but also enjoy ...'. Suggestion: Use infinitive 'to go', remove redundant modals, and simplify clause structure for clarity.