Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and grammatical errors (e.g. "watch views by my own eyes" → "enjoy them with my own eyes"). Use varied vocabulary like "photograph"/"capture" and "take in the scenery".

Example: I used to photograph everything, but now I prefer to enjoy scenery with my own eyes because taking photos can distract me from the moment. For example, when I hike I like to take time to look around and appreciate the landscape rather than constantly stopping to shoot pictures.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific, well-linked reasons. Use correct comparisons and natural phrases (e.g. "I prefer rural views because they show natural landscapes and unique features, while urban views are more architectural"). Avoid awkward phrases like "in a point of nature."

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural landscapes, such as rolling hills and lakes, which feel peaceful and varied. In contrast, urban views tend to focus on buildings and streets, which I find less relaxing.

Suggestion: Answer directly and cleanly, then give a brief reason and an example. Remove hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Strengthen vocabulary: "distinguish between" instead of "divide."

Example: I don't distinguish between views at home and abroad because beautiful scenery can be found anywhere. For example, whether it's a coastal cliff in my country or a mountain lake abroad, both can be equally stunning and worth enjoying.

× I used to photograph everything around me, but now I don't really like this type of hobby, so I just like to see views, watch views by my own eyes. So I don't see that necessarily to photograph everything around me.

✓ I used to photograph everything around me, but now I don't really enjoy that hobby; I prefer to look at views with my own eyes, so I don't feel the need to photograph everything.

Primary issues: incorrect verb/infinitive use and awkward sentence structure. 'watch views by my own eyes' is unnatural and uses wrong verb; correct phrase is 'look at views with my own eyes.' 'I don't see that necessarily to photograph' is ungrammatical; correct idea is 'I don't feel the need to photograph.' Also replace 'like this type of hobby' with 'enjoy that hobby' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use natural collocations (enjoy a hobby, look at views, feel the need to) and simplify sentence structure by combining related ideas with connectors like 'so' or ';'. Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 6, 26

× I prefer more views in rural areas because they're mostly the best views in a point of nature, in a point of something unusual, than urban areas that have just structural buildings.

✓ I prefer rural views because they usually show the best aspects of nature and unusual scenes, unlike urban areas that have mostly buildings.

Problems: awkward comparative construction and unnatural phrases. 'I prefer more views in rural areas' should be 'I prefer rural views' or 'I prefer views in rural areas.' 'the best views in a point of nature' and 'in a point of something unusual' are ungrammatical; better: 'the best aspects of nature and unusual scenes.' Use 'unlike' or 'rather than' for contrast instead of the original phrasing. Suggestion: use clear comparatives ('prefer X to Y', 'unlike', 'rather than') and standard collocations ('aspects of nature', 'buildings'). Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 26, 25, 13

× So therefore I like to view more suburb areas.

✓ Therefore I prefer to visit suburban areas.

Problems: 'So therefore' is redundant; choose one connector. 'View more suburb areas' is ungrammatical: 'view' is not used with areas, and 'suburb' should be the adjective 'suburban' or the noun 'suburbs.' Use 'visit suburban areas' or 'explore the countryside/suburbs.' Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and appropriate verbs for actions (visit, explore, prefer). Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 26, 13, 1

× I don't usually divide views from if uh, if it's from my country or in the other countries.

✓ I don't usually distinguish between views from my country and views from other countries.

Problems: 'divide views from if' is ungrammatical; correct verb is 'distinguish between' and use parallel structure 'views from my country and views from other countries.' Also remove filler 'uh' and the extra 'if.' Suggestion: use standard verbs for comparison/contrast (distinguish between, tell apart) and keep parallel structure. Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 26, 11

× I think in From my point of view you can find beautiful views everywhere, so you have to enjoy any moment even if it's your own country or other country.

✓ From my point of view, you can find beautiful views everywhere, so you should enjoy every moment whether you are in your own country or another country.

Problems: redundant 'I think in From my point of view' and incorrect capitalization; remove 'I think' or 'From my point of view.' Use 'should' rather than 'have to' for recommendation and 'every moment' instead of 'any moment.' Use 'whether you are in your own country or another country' for correct contrast and grammar. Suggestion: avoid redundancy, ensure correct clause connectors ('whether'), and use appropriate modal verbs for advice ('should'). Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 26, 7, 4