Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Use correct verb forms and simpler phrasing (e.g. “motivates me” and “helps me relax”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if you add detail.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing beautiful natural views because they motivate me and help me relax. For example, I often take photos of sunsets by the lake to clear my mind after a busy day.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Give a clear preference or say you like both and explain with one specific reason. Use correct grammar (e.g. “have advantages,” “urban areas are”). Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a linking word like “but” or “because.”

Example: I like both urban and rural views, but I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For instance, city skylines and street life give me interesting subjects to photograph.

Suggestion: Be more specific and concise. State your position clearly and support it with a concrete reason or short example. Use accurate phrasing (e.g. “different landscapes and cultures,” “I can learn about other places”). Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so.”

Example: I appreciate views in both my country and abroad because each place offers different landscapes and cultures. For example, traveling lets me photograph unique architecture and learn about local traditions.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of natural or beautiful views because it gives me motivate and I take relax for from them.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of natural or beautiful views because they motivate me and help me relax.

Two issues: subject agreement with verbs for plural noun 'views' and incorrect verb forms. 'gives me motivate' is wrong; use 'they motivate me' (views plural -> they; 'motivate' base form). 'I take relax for from them' is ungrammatical; use 'help me relax' to express that pictures make you feel relaxed. Suggestion: use plural pronoun for 'views' and common collocations like 'motivate me' and 'help me relax'. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× I prefer both because both have advantages and advantages, but mostly I think urban areas is suitable for me because I love cities.

✓ I prefer both because each has advantages, but mostly I think urban areas are more suitable for me because I love cities.

'both have advantages and advantages' is redundant; use 'each has advantages' or 'both have advantages'. Subject-verb agreement: 'urban areas is' should be 'urban areas are' because plural subject requires plural verb. Also 'more suitable' is clearer comparative phrasing. Suggestion: avoid repetition and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I also prefer both my own country and other countries because every country has different nature and different culture and I think I learn about other urban area, other countries.

✓ I also prefer both my own country and other countries because every country has different nature and culture, and I think I can learn about other urban areas and other countries.

Multiple issues: 'every country has different nature and different culture' is acceptable but redundant; combined with conjunctions it's better to streamline. 'I think I learn' is incorrect tense/modal use for expressing potential/ability; use 'I think I can learn' or 'I can learn' to indicate possibility. 'other urban area, other countries' is inconsistent in number; use plural 'urban areas' to match 'countries'. Suggestion: use 'can' for ability/possibility and keep number agreement between nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 27