Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and add one specific detail explaining why you enjoy it. Use linking words for fluency. Aim for 2–4 sentences, correct minor grammar (e.g., “as often as possible”, “gives me a lot of joy”, “keeps memories”).

Example: Yes, I do. I take photos of different views as often as possible because they give me a lot of joy and help me preserve memories. For example, I often revisit photos from hikes to remember the scenery and the mood of the day.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a specific reason and brief example; remove repetition and fillers. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more natural and peaceful than urban scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and forests since the colors and textures are more calming and varied than city streets.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct awkward phrasing (e.g., “I prefer photos of other countries because I’m familiar with most places in my country”) and avoid incomplete fragments. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Example: I prefer photos of other countries because I’m already familiar with many places in my own country. For example, images from Japan or Norway feel more exciting to me since they show landscapes and cultures I haven’t experienced before.

× Yes, actually I do I take pictures of different views, uh, as often as it possible because I think it umm, gives me like so much enjoy and I think it will be good for a memory and I really like to rewatch these pictures.

✓ Yes, actually I do. I take pictures of different views as often as possible because I think they give me a lot of enjoyment, and I think they will be good memories; I really like to look back at these pictures.

Multiple present tense and related issues: 'as often as it possible' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'as often as possible' (adverbial phrase). 'gives me like so much enjoy' is wrong word choice and form; use plural subject 'they' for 'pictures' and noun 'enjoyment' or 'a lot of enjoyment'. 'it will be good for a memory' should be plural/abstract 'they will be good memories' or 'good for memory'—here 'memories' fits. Also punctuation and sentence boundaries needed: add periods and conjunctions. Use present simple for habitual actions ('I take', 'they give'). Suggestions: use 'as often as possible', match subject and verb number, use correct noun forms ('enjoyment', 'memories'), and split into clear sentences.

× I prefer pictures in rural areas because it's more natural than urban areas because urban areas are not that pretty and not that natural as, uh, rural areas in that I really like. So that's it.

✓ I prefer pictures of rural areas because they are more natural than urban areas; urban areas are not as pretty or as natural as the rural areas that I like.

Pronoun and comparison issues: 'it's more natural than urban areas' wrongly uses singular 'it' for plural 'pictures' or 'rural areas'; use 'they' or refer to 'rural areas' directly. Comparison structure 'not that natural as' is incorrect; correct form is 'not as natural as'. Repetition 'because' can be reduced and sentence reorganized for clarity. Suggestions: match pronouns to their antecedents, use 'as...as' for comparisons, and keep parallel structure ('as pretty or as natural').

× I prefer more pictures of another country rather than pictures of my country because I have already seen almost every picture of the size of my country.

✓ I prefer pictures of other countries rather than pictures of my country because I have already seen almost every picture of my country.

Tense and phrasing: 'another country' vs 'other countries'—use plural 'other countries' to match general preference. 'almost every picture of the size of my country' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'almost every picture of my country'. Keep present perfect 'I have seen' to indicate past experiences relevant now. Suggest use 'other countries' and remove 'of the size' which is incorrect here.

× So which means that, uh, pictures of another country would be more interesting and more breathtaking.

✓ So that means pictures of other countries are more interesting and more breathtaking.

Awkward sentence structure: 'So which means that' is incorrect; use 'So that means' or 'This means that'. Also maintain tense consistency—use present simple 'are' to express general truth rather than conditional 'would be' since preference expressed as fact. Use consistent 'other countries' plural to match prior correction. Suggest using clearer connectors ('So that means') and consistent tense.

× And I'm really in.

✓ And I'm really into it.

Incomplete phrase: 'I'm really in' is incomplete; correct idiom is 'I'm really into it' meaning enthusiastic about something. This fixes sentence structure and provides a clear object. Suggest learning common phrasal/idiomatic expressions and completing them ('into' + object).