Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid vague phrasing like "I can remember my moments"; instead, say how photos help you remember or feel. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember special moments with my family. For example, I often photograph sunsets during family trips, which brings back the emotions and atmosphere of that day.

Suggestion: Organize your response: give a direct preference sentence, then add one or two specific reasons linked with words like "because" or "for example." Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g. "I prefer rural areas" not "I will prefer the views of rural area"). Use plural/singular correctly and keep sentences shorter.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is cleaner and there are open fields and farm animals. For example, on weekend trips I enjoy photographing winding country roads and grazing cows, which I can't find in busy, polluted cities.

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct answer (e.g. "I prefer both, but..."), then explain one clear reason with linking words. Avoid contradictory or confusing statements about introversion and friends; clarify whether you travel at home with family and abroad with friends. Use correct articles and verb forms.

Example: I prefer both, but I tend to take more photos in my own country because I often travel there with my family and feel comfortable exploring together. When I go abroad, I usually travel with friends, so I take different kinds of photos, like city landmarks and street scenes.

× Yes, I love capturing pictures of different views as I can remember my moments spent with my family.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they help me remember moments I spent with my family.

The original uses 'capturing pictures' which is awkward; 'taking pictures' is more natural. Also 'as I can remember my moments' mixes clauses incorrectly; use 'because they help me remember moments I spent with my family' for clear cause and correct verb tense. Improve by using natural collocations ('take pictures') and a clear connector ('because').

× I will prefer the views of rural area because in urban areas due to vehicles, the environment is very polluted, but in rural areas people prefer to ride bicycles or they prefer walking, so the environment is cleaner and there are fields and animals rather than urban.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because in urban areas, due to vehicles, the environment is very polluted; in rural areas people prefer to ride bicycles or walk, so the environment is cleaner and there are fields and animals unlike in urban areas.

Mistakes include inappropriate use of 'I will prefer' (unnatural for general preference) and 'rural area' singular instead of plural. Also 'they prefer walking' should be parallel 'walk'. Use 'unlike in urban areas' for contrast. Improve by using simple present for habitual preferences, plural nouns where general, and parallel verb forms.

× I prefer both but to be honest I love to capture videos in my own country because there I visit different places with my family.

✓ I prefer both, but to be honest I love to take videos in my own country because I visit different places there with my family.

The original 'because there I visit' has awkward word order; 'visit different places there' is natural. Also 'capture videos' is less common than 'take videos'. Keep simple present 'I visit' for habitual actions. Improve by choosing natural collocations and correct adverb placement.

× Because I am an introvert person I don't have that much of friend so in abroad I visit with friends.

✓ Because I am an introvert, I don't have many friends, so I usually travel abroad with friends.

Errors: 'an introvert person' should be 'an introvert' or 'an introverted person'; 'that much of friend' is ungrammatical — use 'many friends'; 'in abroad' should be 'abroad'; 'I visit with friends' unclear — 'travel abroad with friends' is appropriate. Improve by using correct noun phrases, quantifiers ('many'), and correct adverb 'abroad', and clarifying the verb ('travel').