Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, limit to 2–4 sentences, correct grammar and word order, and give a concrete example of what you enjoy photographing (e.g., sunsets, city skylines, mountains). Use simple linking words if adding a reason. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “views landscapes”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain panoramas when I travel, because the colors and shapes change a lot and look dramatic in photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly and improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 supporting reasons with linking words (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Replace vague words like “artificial” with precise phrases such as “man-made architecture” and correct verb forms and articles.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy man-made architecture and the variety of buildings. For example, tall skyscrapers, bridges, and street murals often have interesting designs that make photos more dynamic.

Suggestion: Be clear about what you mean (you likely meant “buildings” or “views”). Give a direct answer and reconcile it with your personal situation. Use one topic sentence stating preference, then one supporting detail explaining why, and mention Toronto as an example if relevant. Fix vocabulary and avoid fillers like “Umm.”

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different architectural styles and cultural scenes. However, I also like the landscapes in Toronto, such as the waterfront and parks, which are very beautiful and familiar to me.

× There are a lot of views landscapes so I like to move to various place.

✓ There are a lot of landscapes, so I like to move to various places.

The sentence mixes countable nouns and modifiers incorrectly. 'views landscapes' is redundant; choose one noun. 'Landscape' as a countable noun needs plural 'landscapes' when saying 'a lot of'. Also 'place' should be plural 'places' because 'various' requires plural. Suggestion: remove redundant word 'views' and use plural nouns: 'a lot of landscapes' and 'various places.'

× I prefer using urban areas to rural areas.

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural areas.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun phrase without 'using.' 'Using' is unnecessary and awkward here. Remove 'using' to form the correct comparative structure 'prefer A to B.'

× The view of urban areas are artificial so it is created by humans.

✓ The view of urban areas is artificial, so it is created by humans.

The subject 'The view' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is' not 'are.' Ensure verb agrees with the grammatical subject. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× So there is a intention and design.

✓ So there is an intention and design.

The indefinite article before a word beginning with a vowel sound should be 'an,' not 'a.' 'Intention' begins with a vowel sound, so use 'an intention.' Also consider adding 'a' before 'design' for parallelism: 'an intention and a design.'

× I prefer bills in other countries.

✓ I prefer buildings in other countries.

'Bills' is likely a wrong word choice. The intended noun is probably 'buildings' or 'buildings' as countable plural. 'Bills' (paper money) makes no sense in context. Replace with correct plural 'buildings' to match meaning and countability.