Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de clarté, de précision et de structure. Améliorez la grammaire (singulier/pluriel, accords), évitez les mots confus («bus bones») et organisez la réponse en une phrase directe suivie d’un ou deux détails précis. Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence (par exemple: “for example”, “also”). Conservez la longueur à 3–4 phrases maximum.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit a park I often photograph trees and people relaxing, and in the city I focus on buildings and street life. I like capturing atmosphere and small moments that tell a story.

Suggestion: Votre réponse montre des bonnes idées mais contient beaucoup de remplissage («like») et des répétitions. Rédigez une phrase claire pour répondre directement, puis ajoutez 1–2 raisons spécifiques avec des liens logiques (par exemple: “however”, “on the other hand”). Remplacez les expressions vagues par des détails concrets (par ex. “nightlife, architecture, calm landscapes”).

Example: I think both urban and rural views have advantages. In cities I enjoy photographing lively streets, night scenes and interesting buildings, while in rural areas I prefer peaceful landscapes, farms and natural textures that convey calmness.

Suggestion: Bonne idée principale mais la réponse est un peu désorganisée et informelle. Commencez par une phrase claire indiquant la préférence, puis fournissez 1–2 raisons spécifiques et évitez les jugements brusques (par ex. “I don't like”). Utilisez des faits précis et un vocabulaire approprié (par ex. “Himalayas, landscapes, tourism”).

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has the Himalayas and many dramatic mountain landscapes. These views attract tourists and offer unique photo opportunities, whereas in Canada I find many snowy scenes, which I appreciate but do not prefer for my style of photography.

× Yes, I like to take picture of different views a scenario.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views and scenes.

The student used 'picture' instead of plural 'pictures' (singular/plural) and wrote an awkward phrase 'a scenario'. Use 'pictures' and 'scenes' for natural English. Also use 'and' to connect items. Suggestion: say 'take pictures of different views and scenes.'

× So let's suppose if I'm going to park, I like to take a picture of bus bones, whereas I'm in city there I'd like to take picture of how cities goes on.

✓ Suppose I'm going to the park: I like to take pictures of buses, and when I'm in the city I like to take pictures of how city life goes on.

Multiple issues: missing articles ('the park', 'the city'), incorrect singular/plural ('bus bones' unclear; likely 'buses'), missing plural 'pictures', and wrong verb form 'goes on' with 'life' or 'city life'. Use 'take pictures of buses' and 'how city life goes on'. Also remove 'let's' inappropriately used.

× So in my point of view, like both has its own advantages.

✓ In my point of view, both have their own advantages.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun agreement: 'both' is plural so use 'have' not 'has', and 'their' (plural) instead of 'its'. Suggestion: 'both have their own advantages.'

× Like if I'm in city area, like I can show like nightlife of city and how people live and like how their lifestyle goes on.

✓ If I'm in a city area, I can show the city's nightlife, how people live, and how their lifestyles go on.

Missing articles: use 'a city area' or 'the city'. 'Nightlife of city' is improved to 'the city's nightlife'. 'Lifestyle' should be plural 'lifestyles' when referring to people generally. Remove filler 'like'.

× Like, whereas if I'm in village area, like I can show nature environment, like how nature moves, like how nature like give us peaceful and like, yeah.

✓ Whereas, if I'm in a village area, I can show the natural environment, how nature changes, and how it gives us peace.

Unnecessary fillers ('like', 'yeah') and incorrect noun phrases ('village area' needs article 'a'). Use 'natural environment' instead of 'nature environment'. 'How nature moves' is odd; use 'how nature changes' or 'the changing natural scenery'. Use 'gives us peace' rather than 'give us peaceful'.

× So as per me I'll choose my country as my country is known for having highest mountain in the world.

✓ So I would choose my country because it is known for having the highest mountains in the world.

'As per me' is not natural English; use 'I would' or 'for me'. Missing definite article 'the highest mountain' or better 'the highest mountains'. Also 'because' connects clauses better than 'as'.

× Basically I'm from Nepal so yeah we have a lot of mountain and most of tourists visit our country because of our nature.

✓ Basically, I'm from Nepal, so we have a lot of mountains and many tourists visit our country because of its natural beauty.

Pluralize 'mountain' to 'mountains' and use 'many tourists' rather than 'most of tourists'. Use 'its' to refer to the country (possessive). 'Nature' is better phrased as 'natural beauty'.

× But currently I'm in Canada and Canada is all about snow so which I don't like.

✓ But currently I'm in Canada, and Canada is known for snow, which I don't like.

Sentence structure: 'so which I don't like' is incorrect. Use 'which I don't like' to refer to the preceding clause. Added commas for clarity and 'known for snow' is idiomatic.