Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中注意句子简洁和语法准确，避免重复和冗余。可以先给出直接回答，再用一两句解释理由并补充具体细节或例子。注意时态和主谓一致，修正错词（如 “it it”）和非地道表达（如 “I'll ever take”）。

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of beautiful views. I find photography a useful way to record special moments and share them with friends on social media. For example, last summer I posted landscape shots from a hike and received many comments from my classmates.

Suggestion: 回答要更流畅并注意完整表达。先直接回答，再用一两句具体理由和细节支持，避免语法错误和不完整句（如句尾中断）。改进连词和介词用法（如 “living in a city”, “lived in the countryside”）。

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones. I grew up in the countryside near a mountain, so I love the fresh air and wide landscapes; for instance, I often walked by the river and enjoyed the mountain views every morning.

Suggestion: 回答应更准确使用词汇和语法，并提供更具体的比较理由。避免错词（如 “leaving” 应为 “living” 或 “in”）和主观绝对化（“China is better” 可改为更客观的比较）。用一两句说明为何本国风景更有意义，再适当承认异国特色。

Example: I prefer scenery in my own country because it feels more familiar and culturally significant to me. For example, China's diverse landscapes, from ancient water towns to dramatic mountains, remind me of family trips, while I also appreciate Japan's charming architecture and tidy streets.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures when I see beautiful views because I think it's a useful way to record and share it to my friends.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures when I see beautiful views because I think it's a useful way to record them and share them with my friends.

句中“share it to my friends”有两个问题：一是“share”后通常直接接受词或用“with”表示与谁分享，不能用“to”；二是前文的“pictures”是复数，作为宾语要用复数代词“them”而不是“it”。建议改为“record them and share them with my friends”。

× Also thanks to the social media it it become easy to store the pictures I'll ever take.

✓ Also, thanks to social media, it has become easy to store the pictures I take.

句子问题包括时态和多余词。“it it”为重复，应去掉一个；“become”在完成影响下应使用现在完成时“has become”；“I'll ever take”不符合上下文，通常说“the pictures I take”或“the pictures I'll take”。建议使用现在完成时和简洁的定语从句。

× I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas rather than in urban areas.

比较结构中两部分保持平行更自然，第二处需要加介词“in”表示“在城市地区”。虽然原句可理解，但为保持结构对称建议补上“in”。

× Though I'm not living city, I have lived in countryside with a mountain nearby my house so I really enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery outside my windows.

✓ Though I don't live in the city, I have lived in the countryside with a mountain near my house, so I really enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery outside my windows.

原句有多处问题："I'm not living city" 时态和结构错误，正确应为一般现在时否定“don't live in the city”；“in countryside”缺定冠词，应为“in the countryside”；“nearby my house”搭配错误，正确为“near my house”；另外在并列句中加入逗号并在“beautiful scenery”前加定冠词更自然。

× That's why I love the.

✓ That's why I love it.

原句不完整，缺少宾语。根据上下文指代前文提到的“countryside”或“the scenery”，应补上相应代词，例如“it”。建议写完整句子以避免句子残缺。

× I prefer views in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

此句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句即可。

× I was born in China and I do love the different landscapes in this country, from mountains and rivers to ancient town, which feel more familiar and meaningful to me.

✓ I was born in China and I do love the different landscapes in this country, from mountains and rivers to ancient towns, which feel more familiar and meaningful to me.

问题在“ancient town”应使用复数“ancient towns”来与前面的复数并列项一致；整体时态和结构正确。建议保持名词形式与并列项一致。

× Although I'm now leaving Japan and I do enjoy the cute buildings in this country.

✓ Although I'm now living in Japan and I do enjoy the cute buildings here.

原句“leaving Japan”意思是“正在离开日本”，与要表达的“现在居住在日本”相反，应改为“living in Japan”。此外“in this country”在口语中用“here”更自然。

× Overall China is better.

✓ Overall, China is better for me.

原句比较不完整，缺少比较参照对象或说明比较范围。加上“for me”可以表明主观偏好；句首加逗号使语气更自然。