Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar mistakes, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) correctly and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach so I can look back and relive the peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference in one sentence, reduce hesitations, correct vocabulary (use 'quiet' instead of 'silent' and 'bothered' instead of 'bothering'), and add a specific reason with an example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and natural. For instance, walking in the countryside helps me relax and enjoy open fields and fresh air.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a concise statement, avoid filler words, and give a specific comparison or brief reason. Use linking words like 'because' or 'while' to show contrast and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I like views in both my country and abroad because each place offers unique scenery and cultural differences. For example, my country has familiar landscapes, while other countries offer new architecture and traditions to explore.

× So I'll recall that moments by viewing those beautiful pictures, which is a good way to story or.

✓ So I'll recall those moments by viewing those beautiful pictures, which is a good way to tell the story.

Original sentence used 'that moments' (wrong demonstrative and plural agreement) and 'to story or' which is ungrammatical; 'story' needs a verb like 'tell' to form a proper verb phrase. Correction fixes demonstrative and plural ('those moments') and replaces the noun 'story' with the verb phrase 'tell the story'. Suggestion: use 'tell the story' or 'remember' to convey recalling events.

× Uh, it's a difficult question to answer to be honest.

✓ Uh, it's a difficult question to answer, to be honest.

The original is understandable but missing a comma for natural phrasing. This is not a definite article error in content but fits 'Incorrect use of the definite article' only if article use exists; however the main issue is punctuation and style. Suggestion: add a comma and pause: 'to answer, to be honest.'

× I like uh, rural area because it's more beautiful and uh, silent, which can help you find your inner peace instead of in instead of being bothering.

✓ I like rural areas because they're more beautiful and quieter, which can help you find inner peace instead of being disturbed.

Problems: 'rural area' should be plural to match general preference ('rural areas'); 'it's' changed to 'they're' to agree with plural; 'silent' is an adjective but 'quieter' is comparative when comparing to urban areas; phrase 'instead of in instead of being bothering' is ungrammatical — use 'instead of being disturbed' or 'rather than being bothered'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, correct subject-verb agreement, use comparative adjectives and use appropriate participial adjectives ('disturbed' or 'bothered').

× Umm, tough question. I'd say both sceneries that I all like because they have different, uh, characters and, uh, cultures.

✓ Umm, tough question. I'd say both; I like both kinds of scenery because they have different characteristics and cultures.

Errors: 'sceneries' is nonstandard — 'scenery' is an uncountable noun or use 'kinds of scenery'; 'that I all like' is incorrect pronoun placement and unnecessary; 'characters' likely intended 'characteristics'. Correction makes noun usage natural ('kinds of scenery' or 'scenery'), removes redundant pronouns, and replaces 'characters' with 'characteristics'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenic views/kinds of scenery' and place pronouns correctly ('I like both').