Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha açık ve doğru dilbilgisiyle verilmelidir. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kullanın, sonra nedenini ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltın. Örneğin “videos” yerine “views” kullanılmalı; ayrıca ‘I just making’ ifadesi hatalıdır, ‘I just enjoy taking them’ gibi doğru bir ifade tercih edin. Yanıt 2–3 cümleyle sınırlı olmalı.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I don’t aim for perfection because I’m not a professional; I take pictures to capture memories and enjoy the scenery.

Suggestion: Cümlelerin zaman uyumunu ve kelime seçimlerini düzeltin. Kısa, doğrudan bir tercih cümlesi verin; ardından nedeni açıklayın ve bağlaç kullanın. Fazla dolgu sözcüklerini (‘uh’, ‘umm’) çıkarın. Örneğin ‘I like rural areas because I live there and can easily find peaceful scenes’ gibi net ifade kullanın.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I live in the countryside and there are many peaceful landscapes to photograph. However, I sometimes go to cities for more dynamic and varied photo opportunities.

Suggestion: Cümleyi mantıklı ve tam bir şekilde kurun; anlamsız veya eksik cümleleri düzeltin. Net bir tercih belirtin, nedenini spesifik örneklerle destekleyin ve mümkünse bir karşılaştırma yapın. Örneğin ‘my own country’ demenizin sebebini manzara türleri veya kültürel bağlamla açıklayın.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country because the natural landscapes and cultural scenery are familiar and meaningful to me. In contrast, views abroad can be interesting, but I feel more connected to places at home.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures of different videos.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views.

The word 'videos' is incorrect here; 'views' is the intended noun. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error affecting meaning. Use the noun that matches the context: 'views' (scenery) rather than 'videos' (recordings). Improve by reviewing common collocations: 'take pictures of views/scenery.'

× Uh, but uh, it's not have to be perfect because I'm not a professional photographer.

✓ But it does not have to be perfect because I'm not a professional photographer.

The original sentence uses an incorrect verb construction 'it's not have to be.' The correct structure for necessity negation uses 'does not have to' with a dummy subject omitted: 'it does not have to be.' Use correct auxiliary 'does' for present simple negation. Practice forming 'have to' in negative: 'doesn't have to' or 'does not have to.'

× I just making.

✓ I'm just making them./I just take pictures casually.

'I just making' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' required for the present continuous: 'I am just making.' Also the verb 'make' needs an object; better to say 'I'm just taking pictures' or 'I'm just making snapshots.' Use correct auxiliary + -ing form and include the object when needed.

× I liked being in rural areas but uh, I'm living in umm rural rural areas so I don't have to too much chance to take pictures in urban area.

✓ I like being in rural areas, but I live in a rural area, so I don't have many opportunities to take pictures in urban areas.

'I liked' implies past; context requires present preference 'I like.' 'I'm living' is awkward for a permanent situation; simple present 'I live' is appropriate. 'I don't have to too much chance' is ungrammatical: 'don't have many opportunities' is correct quantifier and noun choice. Use plural 'urban areas.' Fix tense consistency and quantifier usage.

× I prefer my own country's views because we have really good views and before I see. Did my country's views. I don't wanna.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country because we have really beautiful scenery, and I have seen many of my country's views before, so I don't want to (visit other countries for views).

The original contains fragmented sentences and incorrect pronoun/reference and verb tense. 'My own country's views' is acceptable but smoother as 'the views of my own country.' 'Before I see. Did my country's views.' are fragments; use present perfect 'I have seen' for experience up to now. 'I don't wanna' is informal; use 'I don't want to.' Repair sentence fragments, use correct tense for past experiences (present perfect) and standard pronoun/reference forms.