Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear words and repetitions.

Example: Yes, I do. I find chatting with friends helps me relax after a busy day, and it lifts my mood. For example, when I feel stressed from studying, talking with a close friend for fifteen minutes helps me calm down and gain a fresh perspective.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give specific topics with clear linking words. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Be specific about examples rather than vague phrases.

Example: Usually we talk about our daily lives. For instance, we discuss classes, homework, and interesting things that happened at school or college. We also share small personal updates, such as plans for the weekend.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference and explain with a clear reason and example. Avoid quoting unknown phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: It depends, but I usually prefer talking to one close friend when I need support because it feels more private and personal. For example, when I feel upset, I call my best friend to get advice and comfort rather than chatting in a group.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons with linking words. Mention situations when each option is better and give one concrete example.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication when possible because it's more natural and personal. However, when friends live abroad or are busy, I use social media or video calls. For instance, I video-call a friend who studies overseas every weekend.

Suggestion: Answer directly and explain why arguments happen, using clear linking words and a short example. Avoid vague or confusing phrases.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions. For example, my friends and I often disagree about group project decisions, but we usually resolve it by discussing pros and cons and choosing a compromise.

× Definitely yes, I prefer to chat with the friends as it helps me to refresh as well as restrain my mind from the daily academic greens as well as the stress.

✓ Definitely yes, I prefer to chat with friends as it helps me to refresh and relieve my mind from daily academic concerns and stress.

The definite article 'the' before 'friends' is unnecessary here because we refer to friends in general (use no article). 'Restrains my mind' is incorrect collocation; use 'relieve' or 'refresh'. 'Greens' is incorrect word choice; use 'concerns' or 'pressures'. Use 'and' instead of repeated 'as well as' for clarity.

× The data are you put on my mind throw throw away the day and also to start my day with a happy journey I like to talk with my friend.

✓ The thoughts you put in my mind carry me through the day and help me start my day happily, so I like to talk with my friends.

Original sentence has subject-verb and noun choice errors: 'data are you put' is ungrammatical. 'Thoughts' fits context and agrees with 'carry'. Use plural 'friends' consistently or 'a friend' if singular. Rephrase to make clauses coherent and verbs agree with subjects.

× Generally, I do not like to talk a lot with my friends on the mobile phone, but whenever I chat with them, I used to talk about the daily happenings and experience, what they got observed from the school as well as from the college and also what is going on.

✓ Generally, I do not like to talk a lot with my friends on the phone, but when I do chat with them, I talk about daily happenings and experiences, what they observed at school or college, and what is going on.

'Used to' implies a past habit; present tense 'I talk' suits the habitual meaning. 'Mobile phone' can be shortened to 'phone'. 'Got observed' is wrong passive; use 'they observed' or 'they saw'. Use parallel nouns 'school or college' and 'experiences' plural.

× Basically depends on the situation as well as the mood of the individual as sometimes if I find myself disappointed then I like to talk with my single friend as it is a famous quote.

✓ It basically depends on the situation and my mood; sometimes if I feel down I prefer to talk with a single close friend, as a famous saying goes.

The sentence lacks a clear subject; add 'It' to complete structure. Replace repetitive 'as well as' with 'and'. 'Disappointed' is OK but 'feel down' is more natural. 'Single friend' is awkward; use 'a single close friend'. 'As it is a famous quote' should be 'as a famous saying goes'.

× A single friend is a more better than a set of books and then it helps me to.

✓ A single friend is better than a set of books, and that helps me.

'A more better' is redundant; use 'better'. The comparative needs no 'more' when using 'better'. 'And then it helps me to' is incomplete; finish with 'and that helps me.' Remove 'a' before 'set of books' only if context; here 'a set of books' is acceptable.

× Usually depends on the condition of the individual at sometimes it is not possible to be remained face to face or natural with anyone.

✓ It usually depends on a person's circumstances; sometimes it is not possible to remain face-to-face or natural with anyone.

Sentence lacked subject 'It'. 'Condition of the individual' is wordy; use 'a person's circumstances'. 'To be remained' is ungrammatical; use active 'to remain'. Use 'face-to-face' hyphenated and 'natural' fits but 'comfortable' may be better.

× As in this day and days people prefer to go the outside countries so that they cannot meet their friends, so they prefer to talk through social media activities.

✓ Nowadays people often move to other countries and cannot meet their friends in person, so they prefer to talk through social media.

'In this day and days' is awkward; use 'Nowadays'. 'Go the outside countries' is wrong; use 'move to other countries'. 'Talk through social media activities' is wordy; 'talk through social media' is natural.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends as a on some matters or mindset can be different and our decisions can be finally struck at a one point or others point as it is the mind capacity to talk and take decision on any point so.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we may have different opinions, and our decisions may finally be reached at one point or another; it depends on our ability to discuss and make a decision.

Remove extraneous articles like 'a on'. 'Mindset can be different' better as 'we may have different opinions'. 'Struck at a one point or others point' is incorrect; use 'reached at one point or another'. 'Mind capacity' is awkward; use 'ability'. Sentence restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.