Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Сократите повторения, используйте корректную грамматику и стройте ответ из 2–3 предложений: одно общее утверждение и одно-два уточняющих примера или причины. Исправьте ошибки с артиклями, формами слов и порядком слов (например: "staying in touch", "part of our daily routine", "connections between people").

Example: Yes, I do. Staying in touch with friends is an important part of my daily routine because it helps me relax and feel supported. For example, we check in after work or share funny photos, which always lifts my mood.

Suggestion: Будьте конкретнее и избегайте ненужных повторов и слов-паразитов. Дайте 1–2 конкретных темы и пример, используйте связки (for example, sometimes, because). Избегайте двусмысленных выражений вроде "glossing" — лучше сказать "gossip" или "light-hearted gossip".

Example: We usually talk about recent events, such as news, work or personal milestones. For example, we often discuss weekend plans or share updates about family, and sometimes we have light-hearted gossip about celebrities.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте чёткий топик и добавьте причину и пример. Уберите повторы и грамматические ошибки (например: "I don't like group conversations", "I prefer one-on-one chats"). Уточните, что значит "prefer close" — "close friends" или "one person".

Example: I prefer one-on-one conversations rather than group chats because they feel more personal. For instance, after a tennis match I usually message a close friend to talk about the game rather than post in the group chat.

Suggestion: Ответьте ясно: выразите предпочтение и объясните причину кратко. Избегайте тавтологии и лишних фраз (например: "I have no any opportunity" → "I don't have many opportunities"). Укажите, как часто и почему используете соцсети.

Example: I prefer communicating via social media because most of my friends live in my home country. For example, we use video calls and messaging apps several times a week to keep in touch.

Suggestion: Будьте более точны и используйте простые конструкции: скажите, как часто и почему. Избегайте неясных фраз («it's really early», «point of point»). Добавьте пример короткого случая и как вы решаете разногласия.

Example: I don't argue with my friends very often because we usually communicate openly and respectfully. For example, if we disagree about plans, we talk calmly and try to find a compromise.

× I believe that stay in touch with friends, it's important part of our daily, daily route routine and it's a crucial thing in connections between people's.

✓ I believe that staying in touch with friends is an important part of our daily routine and is crucial for our connections with people.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: verb form after 'believe that' needs gerund 'staying' (Grammar ID 8), there is a missing article before 'important part' (Article errors, ID 22), redundant words 'daily, daily route routine' should be simplified, and 'connections between people's' incorrectly uses possessive and plural noun (Incorrect use of pronouns/nouns, ID 12). Suggestion: use 'staying in touch' and simplify to 'daily routine' and 'connections with people'.

× I like to be in touch with my friends and it makes me happy.

✓ I like being in touch with my friends and it makes me happy.

After 'like' both the infinitive and gerund are possible, but 'like being in touch' is more natural for states/habits (Present tense/verb+ -ing issue, IDs 6 and 8). Suggestion: prefer gerund for ongoing activities.

× Usually we chat about recent events or recent events and uh, sometimes we we could glossing but it's, it's not good.

✓ Usually we chat about recent events, and sometimes we gossip, but that's not good.

Redundant phrase 'recent events or recent events' is repetition (Sentence structure, ID 26). 'Could glossing' uses incorrect modal/verb form; 'gossip' is the correct verb/noun (Verb + -ing and modal usage, IDs 8 and 4). Suggestion: remove repetition and use 'gossip' or 'gossip about something'.

× I understand, but sometimes it happens between close friends and especially girls.

✓ I understand, but sometimes it happens between close friends, especially among girls.

Use 'among' for groups and avoid incorrect structure 'and especially girls' (Incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns/nouns, IDs 11 and 12). Suggestion: say 'especially among girls'.

× I have such kind of behavior.

✓ I have that kind of behavior.

Use 'that kind of' rather than 'such kind of' (Sentence structure/article/word choice, IDs 26 and 22). Suggestion: use 'that kind of' or 'this kind of'.

× Honestly, I don't like don't like communication in any groups.

✓ Honestly, I don't like communicating in groups.

Double negative 'don't like don't like' is a repetition and 'communication in any groups' is awkward; use gerund 'communicating' (Sentence structure and verb+ -ing, IDs 26 and 8). Suggestion: 'I don't like communicating in groups.'

× I have a lot of groups, especially I'm I participate in tennis competitions, so I have this kind of group in my phone.

✓ I am in a lot of groups; for example, because I participate in tennis competitions, I have a tennis group on my phone.

Awkward clause order and preposition errors: 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' and tense/structure corrected (Incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure, IDs 11 and 26). Suggestion: reorder sentence and use 'on my phone' and 'I am in groups' or 'I belong to groups'.

× But as to me, I prefer close.

✓ But as for me, I prefer close friends.

'As to me' is incorrect; use 'as for me'. 'Prefer close' is incomplete; add 'friends' (Incorrect use of pronouns/phrase and sentence structure, IDs 12 and 26). Suggestion: 'As for me, I prefer close friends.'

× As I live in another country and almost all my friends stayed in my own country, that's why I have no, I have no any opportunity that via social media, communicate through via social media.

✓ As I live in another country and almost all my friends stayed in my home country, I don't have many opportunities to meet them in person, so communicating via social media is fine for me.

Mixed tense ('stayed' should be 'stay' or 'are') and redundant/incorrect phrasing 'I have no, I have no any opportunity that via social media, communicate through via social media' (Past/present tense issue, preposition and sentence structure errors, IDs 5, 6, 11, 26). Suggestion: use present tense 'stay' or 'are' and a clear clause: 'so communicating via social media is fine.'

× It's OK for me. I I can do it.

✓ It's OK for me. I can do it.

Double 'I' is repetition; remove duplicate (Sentence structure error, IDs 26 and 10). Suggestion: write 'I can do it.'

× I would say that I can argue with with my friends, not very often.

✓ I would say that I can argue with my friends, but not very often.

Duplicate 'with with' is a typo and sentence flow improved with 'but' (Modal verb usage and sentence structure, IDs 4 and 26). Suggestion: remove duplicate preposition and use 'but'.

× It's maybe I can say that it's really early because I don't have any point of point to argue.

✓ Maybe I can say that it's rare because I don't have any point to argue about.

'It's really early' is incorrect context; likely meant 'it's rare'. 'Point of point' is repetition and missing 'about' after 'argue' (Sentence structure and incorrect preposition, IDs 26 and 11). Suggestion: use 'rare' and 'argue about'.

× There is we can communicate softly with.

✓ We can communicate calmly.

Awkward and ungrammatical 'There is we can communicate softly with.' Remove 'there is' and the trailing preposition; use adverb 'calmly' (Sentence structure and adverb placement, IDs 26 and 20). Suggestion: 'We can communicate calmly.'