Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid trailing sentences and incomplete phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to clarify reasons.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, we often talk about our daily routines and any difficult situations we faced that day because sharing experiences helps us feel supported.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and give specific examples of ‘difficult situations’ and what ‘value’ you gain. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague terms.

Example: I usually talk about personal challenges or meaningful topics. For instance, I might discuss a problem at work or a family issue, and I value these talks because friends give practical advice and emotional support.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer first, then contrast options using linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Finish thoughts fully and give one short reason for each preference.

Example: It depends on the topic. If I want a deep conversation, I prefer one friend because it's more private and focused; however, for light, casual chatting I enjoy group conversations because they are lively and fun.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then contrast the two modes with clear reasons. Avoid hesitations and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'while' to show contrast.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication for deep conversations because I can read facial expressions and tone; while for light chats or quick updates, I use social media because it is convenient.

Suggestion: Be clear and use correct phrases. Start with a direct statement, explain briefly why, and correct unclear phrasing like 'I usually under them'. Offer an example of how you handle disagreements.

Example: No, I rarely argue with friends because I'm worried it might harm our relationship. Instead, I try to stay calm and express my feelings politely or change the subject to avoid conflict.

× Yes, most of stories that I chat with my friends are about my routine, daily lives or difficult situations that I have passed on that day and I think talking with friends or.

✓ Yes, most of the stories I talk about with my friends are about my routine, daily life, or difficult situations I experienced that day, and I think talking with friends is helpful.

Use 'the stories' or 'most of the stories' for countable noun; 'chat with' should be 'talk about with' to show topic; 'daily life' is uncountable not 'daily lives'; 'have passed on' is incorrect — use 'experienced' or 'went through'; sentence fragment 'talking with friends or' is incomplete, replace with 'talking with friends is helpful'. Suggestions: add definite article before 'stories', use 'daily life', replace 'have passed on' with 'experienced', complete the clause about talking being helpful.

× I usually talk about my difficult situations that I have been through or I would like to have some deep conversations with them because I often get value.

✓ I usually talk about difficult situations I have been through, or I like to have deep conversations with them because I often gain value from those talks.

The sentence mixes forms and missing preposition. 'I would like to have some deep conversations with them' is acceptable but 'often get value' lacks object and preposition — use 'gain value from'. Also 'my difficult situations' is awkward; 'difficult situations I have been through' is clearer. Suggestion: simplify clauses, add 'from' and a noun for 'value' (e.g. 'insight' or 'support').

× I think it depends on the stories that you want to talk about. If I want to have deep conversations, I would like to talk with one friend. Umm on the other hand for chit chatting or.

✓ I think it depends on the stories you want to talk about. If I want to have deep conversations, I prefer to talk with one friend. On the other hand, for chit-chat I prefer a group.

Unnecessary 'that' can be omitted: 'stories you want to talk about'. 'I would like to talk with one friend' is okay but 'prefer' is more natural. The fragment 'for chit chatting or' is incomplete; complete idea with 'for chit-chat I prefer a group'. Use 'chit-chat' as noun. Suggestion: avoid fillers like 'Umm', complete contrasts with 'on the other hand' followed by clear clause.

× I prefer face to face communication when I want a deep conversation because I can see their emotion from their faces. But for light conversation umm con talking via social media is.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication when I want a deep conversation because I can see their emotions on their faces. But for light conversation, talking via social media is fine.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective; 'their emotion' should be plural 'their emotions'; preposition 'on' is used with 'faces' not 'from'; sentence fragment at end 'is' needs completion — add 'is fine'. Suggestion: pluralize 'emotion', use 'on their faces', and finish comparative clause.

× I don't argue with friends because I'm afraid I will be abandoned by them, so I usually under them.

✓ I don't argue with friends because I'm afraid they will abandon me, so I usually avoid confronting them.

Passive 'I will be abandoned by them' is grammatical but less natural; active 'they will abandon me' is clearer. The fragment 'I usually under them' is ungrammatical — likely meant 'avoid them' or 'avoid confronting them'. Use 'avoid confronting them' to express reluctance to argue. Suggestion: use active voice for clarity and replace incorrect verb with appropriate phrasal verb 'avoid confronting'.