Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "I'm extroverted"), avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples of topics you chat about. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because I'm quite extroverted. For example, in my free time we often talk about school events and upcoming exams, and sometimes we share funny stories to relax.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about topics and avoid vague repetition. Use correct verb forms and concise phrases.

Example: It depends on the day. If exams are coming up, we usually discuss study plans and ask each other about test topics; otherwise, we share stories and gossip about school life to stay connected.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer, then give two reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" and "however"). Correct word choice (e.g., "privately" instead of "virally") and concise phrasing will improve clarity.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one with my best friend because I feel more comfortable and can speak openly. In contrast, in a group I worry that private things might spread, so I'm less relaxed.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "easily misunderstood") and give a brief example of a misunderstanding to be specific.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to show emotions and avoid misunderstandings. For example, a joking message on Instagram was once taken seriously by a friend and caused an argument.

Suggestion: Provide a clear direct answer, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give one concrete example of how you resolve disagreements. Use linking words like "but" and "so" to make the sequence clear.

Example: Sometimes we do argue when our opinions differ, but we rarely stay upset. For instance, if we have a disagreement about plans, we usually talk it through in person and quickly resolve it by explaining our points calmly.

× Of course I am extrovert so I really love to communicate with other people and chatting with friends, especially gossip about our schools.

✓ Of course I am extroverted, so I really love to communicate with other people and chat with friends, especially gossip about our school.

The adjective 'extrovert' should be used as 'extroverted' to describe a person (incorrect adjective form). 'Chatting' should be 'chat' to match parallel structure with 'communicate' (verb form consistency). 'Schools' should be 'school' to refer to our shared institution (singular is more natural here). Suggestion: use 'extroverted' and keep verbs parallel: 'communicate and chat'.

× So mainly in the free time I love to chatting with my friends, like to relax and share information about something that like detail.

✓ So mainly in my free time I love chatting with my friends, relaxing and sharing information about things in detail.

After 'love' the gerund form is correct ('love chatting'), not 'love to chatting' (incorrect verb+ -ing usage). 'In the free time' should be 'in my free time' (preposition/pronoun usage). Use parallel gerunds: 'chatting, relaxing and sharing'. 'Something that like detail' is ungrammatical; use 'things in detail' to express detailed information. Suggestion: use gerunds consistently and revise noun phrases to be clear.

× It depends on the day if I have to test so I will talk with my friend or chatting with my friends about how about my test and how about your test and most but mostly we chatting about gossiping like tell stories about school and friends and it keep bonding with my friends.

✓ It depends on the day; if I have a test I will talk with my friend or chat with my friends about my test and their tests, but mostly we chat about gossip, telling stories about school and friends, which keeps our bond strong.

Tense and verb form errors: use present simple for habitual actions: 'It depends', 'if I have a test I will' (conditional future), and 'we chat' (habitual). 'Talk with my friend or chatting' should be parallel: 'talk or chat'. 'How about my test and how about your test' is awkward; simplify to 'about my test and their tests'. 'We chatting about gossiping like tell stories' incorrect forms; use 'we chat about gossip, telling stories'. 'It keep bonding' should be 'which keeps our bond strong' (subject-verb agreement and noun choice). Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use parallel structures.

× I prefer to chat with my only friend which is my best friend because I feel more comfortable and I can tell her everything that I want to say and but in a group I often feel less relaxed and virally and worry like if I talk something that's quite secret and it will spread out.

✓ I prefer to chat with my only friend, who is my best friend, because I feel more comfortable and can tell her everything I want to say. But in a group I often feel less relaxed and worried, because if I say something secret it might spread.

Pronoun and relative clause: use 'who' for people, not 'which'. Remove redundant 'and' and split into two sentences for clarity (sentence structure). 'Virally and worry' are incorrect word choices; use 'worried'. 'If I talk something' should be 'if I say something'. 'It will spread out' more natural as 'it might spread' (modal for possibility). Suggestion: use correct relative pronoun, correct adjective 'worried', and split long sentences.

× I prefer communicating face to face because it's easier to convey my emotions and avoid misunderstandings which can easy to misunderstand.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it's easier to convey my emotions and avoid misunderstandings, which can be easily misunderstood.

Awkward and incorrect verb/adverb forms: 'can easy to misunderstand' must be 'can be easily misunderstood' (passive + adverb). Maintain present simple tense for preferences. Suggestion: use passive construction with 'be' and adverb 'easily'.

× When I text on social media via application especially Instagram like friends sometimes misinterpret my message and sometimes they angry.

✓ When I text on social media applications, especially Instagram, friends sometimes misinterpret my messages and sometimes they get angry.

Preposition and noun errors: 'via application' is awkward; use 'on social media applications' or 'via apps'. 'Like friends' is unclear; remove 'like'. 'My message' should be plural 'my messages' for generality. 'They angry' missing verb; use 'they get angry'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on'), pluralize for general statements, and include auxiliary verbs.

× Of course, but it's quite Rory to me to argue with my friends like we it if we are grow to it's something that our opinions don't match, but we usually meet fast to fast so it's easier to communicate clearly and conveys emotion and body length.

✓ Of course, but it's quite rare for me to argue with my friends; it happens if we grow apart or if our opinions don't match. We usually resolve things quickly by meeting, so it's easier to communicate clearly and convey emotions and body language.

Many structural and word choice errors: 'Rory' should be 'rare'. 'We it if we are grow to' is ungrammatical; interpret as 'it happens if we grow apart'. 'Meet fast to fast' intended 'resolve quickly by meeting'. 'Conveys emotion and body length' should be 'convey emotions and body language'. Use proper verbs and noun phrases and split into clearer sentences. Suggestion: simplify ideas, correct word choices, and ensure subject-verb agreement.