Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting details. Avoid repetition and keep it within 2–3 sentences. Use linking words (for example, “about” or “such as”) correctly and more naturally.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me understand them better. We usually talk about school, daily life and our plans for the future.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct verb forms. Give a specific reason and one brief detail. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: We mostly talk about our future because we are in our final year and preparing for university. For example, we discuss which courses to apply for and how to study for the entrance exams.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer and a clear reason with correct grammar. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. “focus” instead of “concentrate to the others”) and avoid unclear words like “loyalty” in this context. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one because we can focus more on each other and listen carefully. This way the conversation feels more personal and meaningful.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a concise, grammatically correct reason. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g. “it does not cause network problems”). Mention one specific advantage of face-to-face communication.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it avoids issues like poor internet connections and allows for clearer gestures and expressions.

Suggestion: Give a direct, natural response and one or two specific details. Avoid repeating the word “argue” and correct grammar (e.g. “when we have different opinions”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include a linking word like “usually” or “sometimes”.

Example: Sometimes we argue when we have different opinions, but usually the arguments are short and focused on the topic. We try to explain our points and then move on.

× Yes, because chatting can let me more understand my friends and we can't talk.

✓ Yes, because chatting can help me understand my friends better when we can't talk in person.

The original sentence misuses 'let' and word order; 'let me more understand' is incorrect. Use 'help me understand' and place 'better' after the verb phrase. Also add 'in person' to clarify 'can't talk'. Use of 'can + base verb' is required rather than 'let + me + verb' in this context.

× About many things such as school, daily life, future and so on.

✓ We talk about many things, such as school, daily life, and the future.

The fragment lacked a subject and verb. Recast as a complete sentence with subject 'We' and verb 'talk'. Add articles and commas for parallel list structure; 'the future' is more natural.

× I usually chat with my friends about future because we are senior 3 now so that we want no go to the university.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about the future because we are in our final year now and want to go to university.

Tense and wording errors: 'about future' needs 'the future'. 'We are senior 3' is nonstandard — use 'in our final year' or 'seniors'. 'so that we want no go to the university' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'want to go to university'. Ensure present simple for habitual actions and correct infinitive 'to go'.

× So in the daily we talking about university.

✓ So in daily life we talk about university.

Incorrect verb form 'we talking' — should be present simple 'we talk' for habitual actions. 'in the daily' is unidiomatic; use 'in daily life' or 'every day'.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because we can concentrate to the others and listening with carefully and loyalty.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can concentrate on each other and listen carefully and loyally.

After 'prefer' use 'to' + base verb ('prefer to chat') or 'prefer chatting'. 'Concentrate to the others' is wrong preposition — use 'concentrate on each other'. 'Listening with carefully and loyalty' mixes forms; use verbs 'listen carefully' and adverb 'loyally' if appropriate.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it will didn't made any problem such as network problem or others problem.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it won't cause problems such as network issues or other problems.

Multiple errors: 'will didn't made' is a contradictory and incorrect verb phrase; use 'won't cause' or 'doesn't cause'. 'face to face' is acceptable as 'face to face' or 'face-to-face' (hyphen not required here). Use plural 'problems' and idiomatic 'network issues'.

× Guess when we meet difference opinion we will argue, argue to others and argue the topic and say out the opinions.

✓ I guess when we have different opinions we will argue about the topic, express our opinions, and debate each other.

Awkward phrases and verb forms: 'meet difference opinion' should be 'have different opinions'. Repetition of 'argue' is clumsy; use 'argue about the topic' or 'debate'. 'Say out the opinions' is ungrammatical — use 'express our opinions'. Ensure parallel structure in the list.