Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and accurate: avoid filled pauses (uh), use correct grammar and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with correct verb forms. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' appropriately.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share experiences and see different viewpoints. For example, when I faced a difficult time, I talked to a close friend and received practical advice I hadn’t considered before.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar: give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific topics. Remove hesitations and correct noun forms (e.g., 'advice' not 'advices'). Use linking phrases like 'for example' to introduce specifics.

Example: We usually talk about things that happen at work and our personal lives. For example, when we encounter a difficult task at the office, we explain how we handled it and give each other useful advice.

Suggestion: Express preference clearly and support with one clear reason. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I prefer to chat' and 'in-depth conversation'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'rather than' correctly.

Example: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can have an in-depth conversation and get honest, personal opinions rather than general views from a group.

Suggestion: Be concise and accurate: say 'face-to-face' and explain two clear reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'moreover'. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can observe body language and facial expressions. Moreover, you usually receive immediate and more honest responses than online messages.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly (yes or no), then explain with a clear example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'we have different opinions' not 'owned the opinion'). Use linking words like 'when' and 'so' to structure the explanation.

Example: Sometimes we do argue, especially when working on a challenging project. For example, if we have different ideas about how to complete a task, we discuss our viewpoints and eventually agree on the best approach.

× I enjoy chatting with my friends because uh, we can share our experiences and broaden the perspectives.

✓ I enjoy chatting with my friends because we can share our experiences and broaden our perspectives.

Remove filler 'uh' and change 'the perspectives' to 'our perspectives' to use correct possessive and natural phrasing. 'Chatting' is correct as a present participle after 'enjoy'. Use 'our' to specify whose perspectives are broadened.

× For example, when I have difficult times and I shared with my friend, I can have more advices that I haven't thought for.

✓ For example, when I have difficult times and share them with my friend, I can get more advice that I haven't thought of.

Mixing tenses and incorrect noun/plural form. Use present tense 'share' to match 'when I have', change 'advices' to uncountable 'advice', and use 'get' rather than 'have' for receiving suggestions. Add preposition 'of' after 'thought'.

× We usually chat about the something that just happened office, the uh, some even, for example, uh, when we find that is a tough job and uh, we share our experiences and advices to each other.

✓ We usually chat about something that just happened at the office, for example, when we find a task is tough and we share our experiences and advice with each other.

Remove incorrect article 'the' before 'something', add preposition 'at' for location, change 'some even' to remove filler and unclear words, use 'a task' instead of 'job' for clarity, change 'advices' to uncountable 'advice', and use 'with each other' (correct preposition). Also remove filler 'uh'.

× I prefer chat with only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to chat' or gerund 'chatting'. Use 'to chat' here for natural phrasing. Subject-verb agreement is fine but the verb form was wrong.

× This because we can deep talk and get the the real and natural opinion rather than the feedback that anyone follow with each other.

✓ This is because we can have deep conversations and get real and natural opinions rather than feedback that people simply repeat to each other.

Add missing 'is' after 'This', change 'deep talk' to 'deep conversations', correct duplicate 'the the', make 'opinion' plural 'opinions', and clarify 'feedback that anyone follow with each other' to 'feedback that people simply repeat to each other'. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× I prefer to communicate with face to face rather than social media This because we can see that really action and their contacts, uh, moreover, we can know that instant, in instant, uh, answer and honest, uh, opinion that they offer to us.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because we can see real actions and body language; moreover, we can receive instant and honest answers and opinions from them.

Use 'face-to-face' without 'with', use 'via social media' for the method, add missing 'because', change 'really action and their contacts' to 'real actions and body language' for clarity, use 'receive instant and honest answers and opinions' instead of awkward phrasing. Remove fillers.

× Honestly speaking, I have a good friend.

✓ Honestly, I have a good friend.

Shorten 'Honestly speaking' to 'Honestly' for natural speech. Tense is present and correct; this is a stylistic improvement rather than tense correction.

× For example, when there are some project that is quite challenging and we have owned the opinion and feedback.

✓ For example, when there are some projects that are quite challenging and we each have our own opinions and feedback.

Use plural 'projects' to match 'some', change 'that is' to 'that are' for agreement with plural, and rephrase 'we have owned the opinion' to 'we each have our own opinions' for correct pronoun use and natural expression. 'Feedback' can stay singular or plural; 'opinions and feedback' is clearer.

× So we have a show on opinion, that's why it's make.

✓ So we express our opinions, and sometimes we disagree, which is why arguments happen.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace 'have a show on opinion' with 'express our opinions' and 'that's why it's make' with 'which is why arguments happen' to convey intended meaning and correct sentence structure.