Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and hesitations, and correct basic grammar (plural forms, articles).

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel connected and supported. For example, when I’m stressed about exams, talking to a close friend calms me down and gives practical advice. Therefore, regular conversations help me maintain good mental health.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence and then give specific examples. Use linking words (for example, such as) correctly, and improve sentence structure to avoid repetition. Mention one or two clear topics and explain briefly why they matter.

Example: Usually we talk about school-related things. For example, we discuss assignments and upcoming exams and share tips on how to prepare. This helps us solve problems together, like dividing tasks for group projects or quizzing each other before tests.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence then explain with specific reasons using linking words (however, because). Fix unclear phrases and grammar. Keep it concise and avoid awkward expressions like 'escape me a sense of connection'.

Example: It depends on the situation. Generally, I prefer chatting in a group because it creates a sense of belonging and lets me stay in contact with everyone. However, if the topic is private or personal, I prefer talking one-on-one because it feels more confidential and focused.

Suggestion: State a clear preference and give specific reasons with natural vocabulary. Avoid filler words and incorrect word choices (e.g., 'treasure' is wrong here). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' properly.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows people to read body language and emotions more easily. For example, seeing someone’s facial expressions helps me understand whether they are serious or joking, which reduces misunderstandings compared with text messages.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use natural collocations. Replace awkward phrases (e.g., 'really argue something') with clearer expressions and give a brief example or reason. Use linking words to show contrast (although, but).

Example: Only occasionally. Sometimes we have different opinions, but we usually resolve them respectfully. For instance, we once disagreed about how to divide tasks for a project, but after discussing it calmly we compromised and finished the work together.

× I love chatting with friend.

✓ I love chatting with friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural because 'chatting with' implies more than one person or general activity with friends. Use plural 'friends' to match meaning.

× Sometime chatting with friend can help me in a sense of connection with each other.

✓ Sometimes chatting with friends can help me feel a sense of connection with others.

Use plural 'friends' for general reference and 'sometimes' (adverb) instead of 'sometime'. 'Each other' is inappropriate when referring to the speaker's feeling; use 'others' or rephrase to 'feel a sense of connection'.

× I can keep in talk, keep in touch with each other and I can.

✓ I can keep talking and keep in touch with them.

Original is ungrammatical and contains awkward phrases. Use 'keep talking' (verb + -ing) and 'keep in touch with them' to convey continuous communication.

× Yeah, I know that that is a good way for people to avoid trauma and depression when they are chatting with friend somehow.

✓ Yeah, I know that it is a good way for people to avoid trauma and depression when they are chatting with friends.

Use plural 'friends' for general reference; remove duplicated 'that that' and 'somehow' (unnecessary). 'It' is clearer than repeating 'that'.

× On my daily basis I chat with them several things such as chatting about assignment, chatting about the upcoming exams and that is a good solution for me to solve the problems so the assignment and can do the working with them together.

✓ On a daily basis I chat with them about several things, such as assignments and upcoming exams; this helps me solve problems and work on assignments together with them.

Fix article 'a daily basis', plural 'assignments', and restructure sentence to be coherent: separate ideas with commas/semicolon and use 'work on assignments together'.

× I chat with them several things

✓ I chat with them about several things

The verb 'chat' typically uses the preposition 'about' to indicate subject matter. 'Chat with someone about something' is correct.

× I would refer chatting with group.

✓ I would prefer chatting with a group.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'; add article 'a' before 'group' and use 'prefer chatting with' for usual phrasing.

× Escape me a sense of connection and I can keep in touch with all of the members.

✓ It gives me a sense of connection, and I can keep in touch with all the members.

'Escape me' is incorrect; use 'It gives me' or 'It makes me feel'. 'Keep in touch with all the members' is clearer; remove unnecessary 'of'.

× But when it comes to a secret team I refer I choose a chatting with individual.

✓ But when it comes to a private matter, I prefer to chat with an individual.

'Secret team' is not appropriate; 'private matter' fits context. Use 'prefer to chat with an individual' and correct article 'an' before vowel sound 'individual'.

× face to face is the very beneficial way for people to interaction.

✓ Face-to-face is a very beneficial way for people to interact.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective, article 'a', and correct verb 'interact' (not 'to interaction').

× For example, uh, it can show your, uh, your treasure, your emotion and so your, umm, behavior.

✓ For example, it can show your emotions and behavior.

'Treasure' is incorrect word choice; use 'emotions'. Avoid repeating 'your'. Combine into concise phrase 'your emotions and behavior'.

× So that is a good one to, umm, communicate better.

✓ So that is a good way to communicate better.

Use 'way' instead of 'one' and standard infinitive phrase 'to communicate better'.

× Now, once in a blue moon, I really argue something with my friend.

✓ Now and then, I sometimes argue about something with my friends.

Use plural 'friends' for general reference and 'argue about something' is the correct collocation. 'Once in a blue moon' or 'now and then' are acceptable; 'sometimes' fits naturally.

× Maybe we have the different perspective, but we respect each other.

✓ Maybe we have different perspectives, but we respect each other.

Use plural 'perspectives' when referencing multiple people, and drop article 'the' before 'different'.

× So that's the reason why I don't have a lot of argument with my friends.

✓ So that's why I don't have many arguments with my friends.

Use 'many arguments' (plural) instead of 'a lot of argument'; 'that's why' is more concise than 'the reason why'.