Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and vague phrases, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., remove repeated words, choose correct nouns) and choose clearer expressions for emotions and benefits.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it keeps me connected to people worldwide. For example, I often share daily updates or personal worries with them, and their advice helps me feel less stressed and more supported.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize ideas with linking words (e.g., 'when' and 'also'). Use specific examples and correct pronouns. Avoid unclear phrases like 'help me to commute.'

Example: It depends: when I'm upset, I tell friends about the problem and ask for their advice. When I'm happy, I talk about simple things like my work tasks or weekend plans, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference statement, use linking words ('however,' 'but'), and avoid redundancy. Use correct phrases (e.g., 'one-on-one' instead of 'only one friend') and give a concrete example of when you'd choose each option.

Example: I prefer one-on-one chats for personal conversations, but I turn to groups when I need different opinions. For example, I would ask a group for travel tips, but discuss relationship issues with a single close friend.

Suggestion: Answer directly and finish the sentence. Use linking words to contrast, fix repetitions and pronoun errors, and provide specific reasons and an example for each mode of communication.

Example: It depends on the situation: at work I prefer face-to-face meetings because they allow immediate problem-solving. However, I use social media to stay in touch with distant friends, for example arranging catch-ups with friends who live abroad.

Suggestion: Give a clear, concise response and a coherent example. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (subject-verb agreement, tense). Explain reasons for arguments and how you resolve them using linking words ('for example', 'because', 'usually').

Example: Sometimes I do, especially when we disagree about work decisions. For example, if a colleague proposes an approach I think is risky, I explain my concerns calmly and we discuss alternatives until we reach a compromise.

× Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends as as it helps me to get engaged with my friends as well as with my family or relatives throughout the world.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends as it helps me to stay connected with my friends as well as with my family and relatives around the world.

This sentence misuses repetition 'as as' and has awkward verb choice 'get engaged with' and wrong preposition 'throughout the world'. Use 'stay connected' which is the correct verb + -ing idea for ongoing action, remove duplicate word, and use 'around the world' for global connection. Also change 'or' to 'and' when listing related people. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, choose appropriate -ing verbal phrase for ongoing state, and use correct prepositions.

× It is also important for my mental health or emotion through which I can share my experiences or goods or bads which will help them to make me such.

✓ It is also important for my mental health and emotions, through which I can share my good and bad experiences, which helps me feel supported.

The original uses incorrect nouns 'emotion' (singular) and awkward phrases 'goods or bads'. Change to plural 'emotions' and 'good and bad experiences'. 'Which will help them to make me such' is ungrammatical; replace with 'which helps me feel supported'. Suggest using clearer noun phrases and correct adjective order.

× It depends. When I'm having a bad day, I share with my friends about my experiences and I ask about her suggestions to tackle those problems.

✓ It depends. When I'm having a bad day, I share my experiences with my friends and ask for their suggestions to tackle those problems.

Incorrect preposition placement and pronoun agreement: 'share with my friends about my experiences' should be 'share my experiences with my friends'. 'I ask about her suggestions' uses wrong preposition and singular pronoun; use 'ask for their suggestions' to match plural 'friends'. Also remove redundant 'I'. Use present continuous appropriately.

× And sometimes when my mood is good or I'm having a good day, I share about the experiences or the daily thing that I do with my friend, which will help me to commute.

✓ And sometimes when my mood is good or I'm having a good day, I share my experiences or daily activities with my friends, which helps me relax.

Wrong preposition 'share about' should be 'share' plus direct object. 'the daily thing that I do' is awkward; use 'daily activities'. 'with my friend' inconsistent number; use plural 'friends' to match context. 'help me to commute' is incorrect meaning; likely intended 'help me relax' or 'refresh me'. Choose a verb that matches context.

× It depends if I share my problems.

✓ It depends on whether I want to share my problems.

Missing subordinating structure: 'depends if' is informal and can be unclear. Use 'depends on whether' and include 'want to' to clarify intention.

× If I need any suggestions or advice, I go with the group of people and have their recommendations on what should I do and with my only one friend.

✓ If I need any suggestions or advice, I go to a group of people to get their recommendations, and I also consult my one close friend.

Conjunction and phrase order errors: 'go with the group of people and have their recommendations on what should I do' has wrong verb patterns and question word order. Use 'go to a group' and 'get their recommendations'. 'with my only one friend' is awkward; use 'my one close friend' or 'my close friend'. Ensure correct word order in indirect statements.

× I share about my glows and my highs and the good things and the bad things and the places I like to visit.

✓ I share my highs and lows, the good and bad things, and the places I would like to visit.

Awkward adjective/noun choices: 'glows' is incorrect here; use 'highs'. Use parallel structure 'highs and lows' and 'good and bad things'. 'places I like to visit' is fine but 'would like to visit' is more natural. Remove 'share about' and use 'share' with direct object.

× At my work I I usually prefer to have a face to face communication with my colleagues and I prefer to immediately tackle the problems.

✓ At work I usually prefer face-to-face communication with my colleagues, and I prefer to tackle problems immediately.

Redundant 'the' before 'work' and extra 'I'. Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' and omit 'a' before 'communication' when speaking generally. Move adverb 'immediately' to natural position after verb. These are article and word order issues.

× However, in social media I can communicate with all my friends with whom who I have not been able to visit.

✓ However, on social media I can communicate with all my friends whom I have not been able to visit.

Use 'on social media' not 'in'. Remove duplicate 'who' and correct relative clause order to 'friends whom I have not been able to visit'. This fixes preposition and pronoun errors.

× So it depends on my.

✓ So it depends on the situation.

Sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical ('depends on my' lacks noun). Replace with 'depends on the situation' to complete the thought.

× It depends on what kind of conversation I'm having with my friends.

✓ It depends on what kind of conversation I'm having with my friends.

This sentence is correct in present continuous; no change needed. Included here to indicate no grammatical error.

× For example, if we are having a good conversation about work related activities and she suddenly come up with the ideas that I don't validate, so we argue on that things.

✓ For example, if we are having a good conversation about work-related activities and she suddenly comes up with ideas that I don't accept, we argue about those things.

Subject-verb agreement and verb tense: 'she suddenly come' should be 'she suddenly comes' (third person singular). Use 'work-related' with hyphen and change 'come up with the ideas that I don't validate' to 'comes up with ideas that I don't accept' or 'agree with'. 'so we argue on that things' has incorrect conjunction and preposition; use 'we argue about those things'. Correct pluralization 'those'.

× However, however we have we have different sort of opinions and it is based on.

✓ However, we have different kinds of opinions, and it depends on the situation.

Redundant repetition 'however, however' and 'we have we have' should be fixed. 'different sort of opinions' is ungrammatical; use 'different kinds of opinions'. 'and it is based on' is incomplete; clarify with 'and it depends on the situation'.